Indecision

Imagine standing on a fence,
Picket between each foot
Staring over the wall
Time to jump or drop

Picture two mirrors facing each other,
Can you fly or will you fall?
Watching others plunging
But I’m still alone.

I stare over the edge
Caught between living:
Unusual, ordinary
I stare over the edge
At both extremes,

And it blows my mind.


(this is probably rubbish - i dont know tbh)

It isn't that bad. I just can't recognize any clear story or anything for that matter. It's held together okay though and it flows smooth enough.

it's kind of about making choices but i dunno if thats very clear?

Not as clear as it could be.