Wow that was just.....the cutest thing. I like Vick I hope he turns out to be good for her.
[quote]“No one will ever keep us apart.”
Was this line supposed to be in italics? That was really the only mistake I found. I absolutely cannot wait for more and more and more. Sorry that was a little weird, but it really is a wonderful story .
If I can impact one person, just one, with my writing before I die, then I've lived a great life
Yay I love Vick, though calling him 'the kid' just really didn't sit well with me. Try 'he'. I really hope that he cures her insecurities and fears. I kept smiling myself every time he talked. And another reason why I liked him is because he doesn't look like the common male love interest in stories...he's unique. You had a couple of awkward sentences that if you read through this you could catch.
Lovely job as always,
~Angel
True love, in all it’s celestial charm, and
star-crossed ways, only exist in a writer’s
mind, for humans have not yet learned
how to manifest it.
I think Vick is really cool and I'm certain they're going to get along just fine. I love how Mr. Sheldon is haunting her and is, in some ways, still in control of her and her feelings. He overshadows all of her decisions concerning her new life, friends, and even how she thinks. It's very realistic.
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