Romeo's Sacrifice

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Loss is felt keenly
More keenly
When it is one you loved meanly
So meanly

I gave it all
All and more
For you, my eternal flower
Withered before you could bloom

Anger and fierce love
Pure and white as dove
Hatred and despair
They don’t care

I gave it all
All and more
For me, my eternal flower
Withered before I could bloom

Through the grapevine?
Fuck it, more wine!
Aggression and monster so
Fashionable, mine hoe

I gave it all
All and more
For us, my eternal flower
Withered before we could bloom

Meaningless words in stones
Fractured memories of passionate moans
Forever screaming
In a metropolis, teeming

We were all and more
Our love, that of ancient lore
I am Romeo and
You are sweet Juliet

Welcome me Juliet, into your arms
Never mind the church bell of alarms
A cold embrace for your Romeo dear
Never again for the mortals to hear
The opposite of courage is not cowardice but conformity

Bee is in the house bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz




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Now that was powerful poetry.
You have serious talent Dora.
But please write about something more happy next time.
I'm not brave, my life simply has no value.
I give up that which has no value for those I love.
That is not brave.




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That's relativly happyish. I thought it was actually quite sweet and cute myself. Saying that, I think Johnny Depp as Sweeny Todd is quite sweet and cute. And overbearingly hot. Off topic anyway!

And please, enough with the Dora. More with the Bee.
The opposite of courage is not cowardice but conformity

Bee is in the house bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz



What praise is more valuable than the praise of an intelligent servant?
— Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice