The Emo Blood Of My Emo Heart

My heart is lead
I'm sitting on my bed
My sheets are red
I wish I was dead
My eyes filled with dread
I wanted a piece of bread
Bread is my med
My feet are small children
(and that line totally works
because our artistic license is awesome)
w00t! Win.

By: Snoink & Teague

I think this would have worked with fifty or so of the evil looking emoticons.

All in all, nice work. I enjoyed every excruciatingly painful rhyme.

-Jared

I'm your Number One fan. I'm totally going to print this out, frame it, and hang it on my wall for the world to see. And then, I'm going to make some fan-art and send it to my favoritest authors in existence.

~ Jabber ~

Haha! this actually made me laugh.
Especially the "My feet are small children" Bit.
Delightfully random

This made my heart tremble in a fit of emo-rific glory.

Oh my.. That was just the funniest poem i have ever read!! Great job!! I really felt the effort in making the whole well.. most of the poem rhyme

When I first saw this title, I thought this was going to be some terrible attempt at trying to convey emotion.

And I was right... it was terribly funny.

Nice job guys!

This makes me emo because I realize that people have written worse stuff than this and been serious about it.

Wow.

Ha ha loved it, i laughed when i read it and my mom looked at me like i was a freak
~M

Lmao, brilliant.

I wish I was dead

The word "was" should be "were" actually. *does grammar tweak*

Also, there's no punctuation except for the last line. Is this poetic effect or you being lazy?

Why are you criticising your own poem, Snoinkus?

Just edit it if it bugs you so much.

Teague
x

Ha Ha Ha

This really made me get in touch with my inner emo. Seriously well done, real funny

Um...

... I thought you weren't supposed to use full caps in titles.

Anyway i thought it was... um...


---Jon---

That certainly was one of the most random andfunny things I've ever read.
Please keep posting.