Clo Needs You!

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can you review this for me?

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"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

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*revived*

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I revive this thread... again! Hopefully more successfully! =)
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Come on people, ask for reviews! O:
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The Kingdom is Departed [1]

Comments about everything, but mostly about the characters, please. And whether it works a first chapter. :D
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I told you I would ask!!

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It's in other fiction. I'm just looking for you to tear it apart about everything. :D

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If you could do this I would be very thankful. Its a fantasy fiction, though its not in the part of having a lot of magic yet. But I think I have the part with a taste of it in here.

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and again thanks in advanced.
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Wooster and Cat are done, Bolt, you're coming up! ^_^
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Steps Ahead of Thunder

Pretty pretty please, Clo? *adorable puppy dog eyes*

I'll be forever in your debt. It's supposed to be horror, for Cat and June's Horror Contest. I'd appreciate tips on how to make it more...horrific? ;) And all-around, of course.

Thanks.

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People I owe reviews in the next few days:

- Bolt
- Kit Kat
- Evi
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So this story is Romance, but I understand if you don't want to review it because its gay romance. Though, if you do critique it, you can be as harsh as you want!
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Okay, now, reviews I owe people:

- Bolt
- Midnight Vamp
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Hey Clo! :)
Could you please review this for me? It's fantasy fiction.

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xxmimixx
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