Advertisment Thread (for people who want their work critted)

Ok, here's an idea:

We can advertise our stories/poems/etc. here, so that people know they're here and get interested. (Besides, I'm sick of plugging people's pm's, much easier to just do it here.)

here's an ad for my story.


Title: My horror novel (title suggestions appreciated.) *although I named it, it's called Utterly Disturbed*
Genre: Action Adventure Fiction
Author: Misty Lynn


Summary:

Bryant and Natasha.
An heir to a fortune and a girl from a trailer-park.
A self-mutilater and a victim of pedifile.
Two self-centered teenagers with nothing to lose.
Apart, they are disasters. Together, they are a catastrophe waiting to happen.

(CRIT PLEASE!)

Hmmm....

Title: Rain Before Dawn
Genre: Fantasy Fiction
Author: Darkmoon158

Do I have to have a summary? *shrugs* oh well...

An exciting story about a girl named Amber trying to find out her past and finds her destiny in the process.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE crit. it...

oh and as a tip the post is called Rain Before Dawn chapters 1-4 (once again revised)...that's the correct one..

Title: Unreasonable Progress
Genre: Contemporary Realistic Fiction
Author: J. Wilder

Summary:

A twelve-year-old gets expelled from his California public school and sent to a strict Catholic boarding school.

Hello all...hell anything of mine I would like critique but really I would like someone to critique my new sci-fi endevor, its in the Sci-Fi section called Solarwinds:.....blablabla. well I'm off to bed.

cheers CL

Title: (Subject to change) Rotten Cage
Genre: Historical fiction
Author: Um, me.

Summary: Irish Catholics Cahira and Eoin McCann leave their infant son in England, hoping he will gain freedom. On return, they are taken from Ireland by the Protestant English Military and forced into a life of torturous slavery, until something unexpected happens.

Can I advertise more than one thing? I need critism!

Title: Take Heart
Genre: Historical Fiction

Summary:

After her father abandons his armies, Beornwyn of Swidhelm takes up his place in a struggle to break tradition leading as a woman, and win her freedom against the powerful Hraedhilegrians.

Title: Arrogance and Ignorance
Genre: Fantasy

Summary:

Worldy Queen Isolde physically suffers the hurts of the World of Daearen as it falls to the fires of Industry.

Yes, finally an advertisement thread!!!

Title: A Thief of Life
Genre: Fantasy Fiction
Author: Writersdomain

Summary: The prelude to a story I am beginning. About assassin Arlen who has decided to turn away from her murderous life, but has been assigned to her most painful mission yet; killing one whom she is close to.
If I tell you much more, it will ruin the story...

Anyone have a clue if this thread will make a difference?

I think this is a very smart thread...

Could someone please say something about this?
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PLEASE!!!

I'm thinking we should set up a more reliable system:

- In order to post up your advertisement, you have to first crit the most recent one.
- The only downside to this is that you may not get more than one crit.
- The upside is that you are guaranteed at least one one crit.

Well until that comes into effect i do want to advertise something of mine that has nothing on it.

Rain Before Dawn
Fantasy Section
And the author...me.

I really need chapter 5 and 6 to be critiqued no one has even written on it and soon it will be on the next page, almost no one reads the other pages, so all i ask of you is to crit. those chapters.

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Tis my art gallary. LOOK AT IT NOW!!!

And Sureal, you said you were a sarcastic person, so I'll take that as sarcasim.

I'd love for anyone to take a look at my poem, "An Anthology of Her." in Dramatic Poetry.

It'd mean a lot to me - I will crit anything of yours in return, two if you drive a hard bargain.

I would be much abliged if anyone could read either my poem called "the bus", its about a bus bombing, sad, and graphic, but I like it alot. Its in "dramatic poetry" I think, or my story "The book of Rock" in "other fiction". Again, I'd be much abliged. And if you could crit both, I would love you forever.

The Black Rose wrote:And Sureal, you said you were a sarcastic person, so I'll take that as sarcasim.

I lied.