Got his butt kicked in class

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RYTHYM GOES LIKE THIS:
Ta ta ta ta titita...
so: one ta equals to one fourth note. one ti equals to one eight note. So ta ta ta ta titita ta ta ta ta titi = one fourth note, one fourth note, one fourth note, one fourth note, two eight notes and one fourth note, one fourth note, one fourth note, one fourth note, one fourth note.

Got his ass kicked in class

Lyrics:

[Em]
[Em]
[Em]
[Em]
[Em]
Got his ass kicked in class
[D]
No one seems to care
[A7]
Why, why does no one care
[G]
'cos he's so different!

[C]
[Am]
[Em]
he's got no friends
[D]
Exept fear
[A7]
It follows him everywhere,
[G]
Even in his dreams

[Em]
Got his ass kicked in class
[D]
No one seems to care
[A7]
Why, why does no one care
[G]
'cos he's so different!

[C]
[Am]
[Em]
Sitting on an alleyway
[D]
only with his fear
[A7]
Keeping him some company,
[G]
While he cries there

[Em]
Got his ass kicked in class
[D]
No one seems to care
[A7]
Why, why does no one care
[G]
'cos he's so different!

[C]
[Am]
[Em]
He won't tell his parents
[D]
'cos he's so ashamed,
[A7]
He gets his ass kicked almost every day.

[Em]
Got his ass kicked in class
[D]
No one seems to care
[A7]
Why, why does no one care
[G]
'cos he's so different!

[C]
[Am]
[Em]
As he sat on the alleyway
[D]
a hand came out of nowhere
[A7]
Asking him to stand up
[G]
The fear stepped away

[Em]
the boy asked if he wants to be
[D]
Friends for a day
[A7]
He answerred yes
[G]
And they walked away.


[Em]
Got his ass kicked in class
[D]
but someone seems to care
[A7]
yes someone seems to care
[G]
oh yes they care

[Em]
Got his ass kicked in class
[D]
but someone seems to care
[A7]
yes someone seems to care
[G]
oh yes they care
To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
-Giuseppe Verdi-




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Nothing to point out. The rhymes are fine, the words aswell ... Its a very used idea but yours is original in the rhymes way.

Ah. The punctuation... you don't have a lot of it. Poor bloke got his ass kicked... Jesus! Such a cruel word -.-`
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that blocke was me on the first grade. BUT NOW I HAVE ALL THE POWER MUAHAHAH :twisted:
To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
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Its about you? Auch... sorry about that. Great that you have the power now... :)
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Dude this song is like rock and roll!!! I could sing it in my head. So great and coolio dude. YEA GREAT JOB!!!!
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But Heaven is blue
The Devil will fined out
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Haha, world is so small.......
Dreams they come and go...ever shall be so...




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Hullo! I changed your title to make it more appropriate. Please refrain from using naughty words in thread titles, even for your lyrics, poems, stories etc. Thank you!
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.”
― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo




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Oh wow. This was funny, I enjoyed it very much. Just change the title, seems a little out there.




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Hey dude I actually sang it out loud, I think I am pretty good. I will come to school and try to sing it. Maybe we can use this song for our band.
Blood is red
But Heaven is blue
The Devil will fined out
And take you




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8) you got your ass kicked in class? damn...

but that's all changed now because you can write condescending literauture about your enemies

good luck with revenge!!! :twisted:



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