In love with you.

I saw you one day and your profound beauty caught my eye.
I want to be with you until the day that I die.
I love the color of your eye and how it resembles the sky.
When, I see people abuse you it makes me cry.
I wonder why you can’t be with me.
Will we ever be?
I want to unlock your heart and set it free.
I need you to carry me through.
You’re beautiful; yes it’s true.
I am and will forever be in love with you.

It's quite cute, but the rhyming is a little obvious - eye, sky, cry, die, me, be, free, etc. You touch on some good ideas, but you touch them...and then you leave them. I think the eye resembling the sky part would be good if it was worded slightly differently, but eye makes it sound like she only has one. It's a good start, but your ideas need to be expanded on, more description, more detail, tell us more about the girl, give us some examples. Keep writing.

i loved this poem, but the rhyming scheme was off.
some lines flowed and were long while others were short
but other than that, great job!