Peace and Truth

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Pull back the curtain.

It is often said that truth alone can be the healer of many dark situations; however, if the beholder of that healing truth cannot see the honest path then what hope is there for everyone else? The answer is none. There is no such thing as intact truth and because of this, the world suffers greatly. You wouldn’t be entirely wrong to say that living with a certain degree of lies wouldn’t exactly be fatal but you would be, in a sense, misguided. After all, many people associate truth with peace; without each other, there is no rest in the world. The sad fact is…they are separated as we speak; therefore, somewhere in this earth, (maybe under our very noses), death or sorrow is consistently appearing. We may not realise it, but peace is a myth; it just doesn’t exist. What happens when truth and peace do meet? Well, how can we know? Because it seldom happens, we cannot identify a specific line of events related to the mysterious meeting of these two elements; however, we can predict what could become of the world if they should meet.




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Very philisophical, bisquit. It's obviously something that you thought about! My only critique is that maybe you could structure this into a poem. It might be quite interesting as it's you at your pensive best! and you could get something out of a philisophical poem. What do you say?
It's nice to be finally connected with you on here! I spent ages trying to root you out - you weren't even friends with Nat!!
I'll see you soon, and you probably won't get this before school starts, but drop me an email or a call or something if you feel like coming into town next week; Katie has already said she's free, but we want more people so we can set a date. So, see you in a week, or maybe less, my friend.

From Charlie. x ^^
Those who dance are considered insane by those who cannot hear the music.
-- George Carlin




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As said veru philosophical, makes you think.
I don't know about that poem thing though.
Is it ment to be this gloomy?
verry good anywayz.
I liked it at the very least :)
To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
-Giuseppe Verdi-



Sometimes you don’t need metaphors to feel something breaking
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