Fallen Angel

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You said you loved me once,
But then you turned away.
An invisible evil
Possessed you,
And it told me to leave.

I've grown up
A lot since then.
I've come back
And now I see a

(Chorus)
Fallen angel
An unloved child,
A corrupted soul.
Fallen angel,
Please don't shy away.
I don't want to hurt you,
I just wish I could love you,
Fallen angel.

Your eyes once had
A twinkling light.
Now all that's left is
A loveless void.

Your innocence was lost
So long ago,
But I don't think
That it's too late
To bring you back
Up on your feet

(Repeat Chorus)

No one loved you
When you needed it most.
They branded you for life.

Where others see
A vicious man
I still see
The boy I loved
Hiding away.

I'll forgive you
For your betrayal
If you forgive me
For walking away
Like you told me to.

It's okay to come out now
I'm holding your hand,
And I can be strong
For both of us
This time...

(repeat Chorus x2)
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

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The chorus is very well done i liked it most of all.
How can you prove that we exist? Maybe we don't exist...




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This was so pretty. I did like the chours too. Nice job.




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It sounds good. The line flows well. It reminds me a little of Incubus. I don't know why.



If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them.
— Henry David Thoreau, "Walden"