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This was a very intruiging piece but, I think it would help if you described more. What does her home look like, what do the main charaters look like? Where doesshe live? It will help capture the reaserand let them be apart of the story. Also, write about how the characters feel. This is a very well written story. I hope to read more.



fun fact i hear my evil twin once wrote a story about a hacker who used the name fyshi33k bc there are 33k-ish species of fish and she liked phishing so fyshi-33k made sense but then she got super embarrassed when someone forced her to explain
— VyperShadow