Brown Bear

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So this is a drawing that Jared request forever ago and I just now finished. Drawing animals + Holly = frustration. I can't find the picture that I based this off of, which sucks. Anywhoo, tell me what you think.
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eviscerate your fragile frame
spill it out in ragged form
a thousand different versions of yourself.




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Aw this is soo adorable!
I really love the hair texture+color.
My one grumble in that the neck is a bit thickish.
But really, it's lovely.
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Aw, very very cute! I do like this, he has an adorable expression.

Helping tips, though: The fur is drawn nice, but the texture is somewhat spacey - I see white between the furs. Also, his right ear seems somewhat smaller than his left.

As a recommendation, go over the drawing and darken the lines. I don't like it when pencil is left light -I think it looks much better when you take the time to press down harder.

Still very good.

~ Clo
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this picture is really good :)

i think it's kind of funny because the bear looks like it's pouting :) i also think that you should have made the snout a little bit more pointy because it looks like a little piggy nose :)

all in all it is really good :)

hope this helps :) if you have any questions please pm me :)

happy drawing :)
omg lol thx HD!




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This is really good! I love it! The texture is perfect! The only thing that's bugging me is the left ear, it's a little too high on the head. But other than that it's really good!

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This bear is so adorable!
The texture is really good.
The one thing I could critic is the slightly large neck, which someone else said, but I'm saying it again anyway.
Really cute pic.
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