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Har-har. I'm posting artwork! :lol:

Disclaimer: I do NOT own the lyrics and lines written here. Don't sue me.

Sorry it's too big...If anyone can tell me how to resize, I'm begging you to help me. Thank you. :D
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Hi.
It's a bit BIG. Couldn't you rescale it?
Um, not really sure if I would call this art - hehe - but it does look pretty cool. I spotted some Regina Spektor lyrics in there... good taste!




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How sweet :D
It's a very cute little drawing,
I also love to doodle so I'm all for those little love doodles.




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it's alright, has the teeny bopper feel to it, I'm sure you understand what I mean. Everything is drawn in your own creativity which anyone must respect, the only problem for me is the messege it relys of broken heart.

High school was love for me, but more so heart break. Always thinking I'm in love always to find out I was never really thinking. This reminds me of that temporary love.




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ohh I like it, so colourful. I love doing stuff like this xD
You have some good taste in music too =D
To resize.. if you don't have an image program better than paint then I think you might be able to resize it on photobucket.. not sure though
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This is HUGEEEE is there any way that yo ucan re-scale it??

Its colourful, but yeah just words really, do you draw anything, like figures, landscape, animals? work with colour, you obviously like it ;)

Glad you chose love as the topic though - its cute. But if you rescale it we will all be able to see it better and give a better opinion on it :D

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again, please re-size this
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Interesting artwork I have to say. Very teenage like, but I do stuff like this all the time, but theya re obviously not as cool as yours. This is very cool. But as many people had said, please re-size it. But I loved it

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Wow its really cool. It's like a artistic version of something a girl would be writing in her notebook about a guy during history class. Lol I like it because It's modern-ish girl type artwork. KEEP IT UP!! :)
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I'm going to review the art part of this, because that is the part that takes real talent, a talent you have.

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I circled the fortes. They're awesome.
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I can only dream and wish of being able to draw these things. Graffiti takes a special skill; it's big, bold, modern calligraphy. These fonts, letters, even the doodles circled put me in awe. Everything else is just scribbling that takes away from real artistry. Flaunt what you can do and don't ruin it with useless chicken scratch.

You have real talent here; showcase it!


Keep it up!
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I love it! It looks like what i draw in class everday with boring gray lead!!! Haha, 'tis true :wink: Anyways, I really like it, it does remind me of love and everything, I like how you didn't do just one thing and another you know? Its truely awesomicle!!!!
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I have to agree with Texan! That graffiti is amazing! I tried graffiti in art class, but I'm just not creative enough. You, on the other hand, are just amazing at it. If you take this little bit that you've thrown into it, and take your time to put towards it, you could make a graffiti masterpiece! All the rest, well... Maybe define the other words more, give them more of a bold look? I do love how it reminds me of drawing hearts in my notebook at school.

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Hi!

These are really good doodles. Most of my doodles end up with two horns growing out of my teacher's head :) As Texan said, the graffiti is awesome! And apart from what Texas has circled, there's that "UMNavanyille" or something at bottom right in purple which is tagged 'That's Me!' which is really good art.

The entire appearance looks good. I would suggest you fill a page with more graffiti rather. Try to stylize those lyrics in such a way that they suit the general look of your doodle.

Keep doodling! :)
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My advice, you've got way too much crammed onto too small a page.

The images would have been great, but you can't tell what they are between all the words.

To be visually appealing, it's better to focus on fewer things so that the viewer can take it in without being overwhelmed. It is pretty good, though.



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