Mindworks

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Plot
Now this is the normal every day almost mundane world you and I and everybody else lives in. Except there are a handful of people who are different, special so to say. These people share a mental connection with each other.

These people could hear each other a million miles away, there aren't any guards to keep each other out, so nothing is hidden from each other, and they also live in the same town. They are on a secret mission to save the world from the normal every day scum and figure out why they're connected like they are.

This isn't meant to be a romance story, so please keep it to a minimum. No kissing scenes at all please. Try just to stick with friends.

Rules
Have good grammar!
Keep it Pg-13
No less than 7 full sentences.
No whole words in caps (use bold and italics)
No chat speak.
If you want to say something about the plot Put it in a color!
Basically write like you do with your own writing.
There are only 8 characters allowed
You are only allowed one character.
To help clarify the difference between spoken words and thoughts put the thoughts in italics and the "words" in quotes.


Profiles
Name
Age (They're all between the ages of 21-24)
Occupation
Hobbies
Appearence~
~Picture
~Hair color
~Eye color
~Height
Personality ups (The good things about them)
Personality downs (the bad thigns)
Pet Peeves
ARI (What you couldn't put anywhere else)

Character's
1.Alice ~ Claire
2.Via ~ Greyson
3.TNCowgirl ~ Cale
4.singerofthenigh ~ Sissy
5.Bella ~ Isabella
6.Laylune ~ Chloe
7.October Girl ~ Aiden
8.Maybe ~ Ty


Claire
22
Lirbarian
Sewing
Image
Black
Green
5'5"
She's optimistic, people who know her says she omits a feeling of light and innocence.
She's too quick to trust people too fully which often gets her into trouble.
People who damage librarybooks.
Last edited by Alice on Sat Aug 16, 2008 2:50 am, edited 6 times in total.
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For now I'll go ahead and join, but....what exactly is the point? I mean, why do they have this power? What are they supposed to do with it? What town is it that they live in?

Name: Greyson "Grey" James

Age: 23

Occupation: Temp

Hobbies: Grey doesn't really limit herself to any few hobbies and is up for anything.

Appearence~
~Picture-ignore the dress style
~Hair color: brown
~Eye color: brown
~Height: 5'3"

Personality ups: She's passionate about what she's passionate about and cares a lot about others very quickly.

Personality downs: Grey puts a lot of effort into other people, but that infortunately makes her hard to get to know. She's a bit secretive about herself, finding it a topic not in need of discussion.

Pet Peeves: people who drive in lanes they know are going to end just to beat everyone else.
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Cale Ryder
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Trainer (fitness center)
Reading, running, riding (horses and bikes)
Appearence~
He fits the description
~Black short hair
~Bright Green
~6'4
He is a big gentle giant and sweet as can be. He is tough and protective
He is protective, and is not that great with girls. He gets all tounge tied
He isn't a fan of lazy people.
"And you wonder why we don't like you!" -Trumpkin
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**saving a spot I promise I'll post a profile ASAP but right now I have to get off >.< sorry!!!****
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™




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Name: Sissy Taylor

Age: 20

Occupation: forest ranger/ horse ranch

Hobbies: singing, and writing, and horses

Appearence:
~Picture~ ~ *dont have one...yet*
~Hair color: blonde/ brown
~Eye color: big china blue eyes
~Height:5'5

Personality ups: she's independent. loves to eat though shes skinny as a toothpick.

Personality downs: she gets emotional at times.

Pet Peeves: has to have some sort of fruit at all times

ARI: ?
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Name - Isabella Milan

Age - 22

Occupation - journalist for the towns papers; writes as a guest for some other papers and magazines

Hobbies - writing, reading, artsy stuff. She plays some piano

Appearence -
~Picture - http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa15 ... rls/29.jpg
~Hair color - brown
~Eye color - brown
~Height - 5 foot 7 inches

Personality ups - always fairly happy; loves helping people; is a worrier (constantly worried for the well being of those she cares about most)

Personality downs - mildly afraid of change; worries about people leaving her; trusts too quickly;

Pet Peeves - liars, cheats, fakes
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I'll help out!

Name: Chloe Starks

Age: 22

Occupation: Works on a friends farm

Hobbies: Singing, playing violin, rock climbing, swimming, reading, acting, roller blading

Appearance~

~Picture
Image
~Hair color: Ummm lots of colors
~Eye color: Golden brown
~Height: Five five

Personality ups: Chloe is a very fun loving, laid back, and independent person. Her outgoing side has gained her the love of most people and he hate of others. She's open and calm some of the time and crazy and fun at others.

Personality downs: The biggest procrastinator ever. Chloe tends to put things off or not do them because of her laid backness. (I know that's not a word =P) She also doesn't take orders too well unless she makes herself listen. Chloe likes to be in control and a leader.

Pet Peeves: Messy things. Chloe isn't a neat freak or have OCD but she like clean areas.




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we need more guys. hey tn can i claim yours.... i think its really sweet that he has a hard time with girls
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Name: Aiden

age:23

Gender: Dude

Occupation: Marine

hobbies: Watching TV, Running, Swimming, flirting.

Apperance: Naturally curly, black hair, Golden speckles for eye color, toned, he's about 6'2 and he's very muscular, naturally tan, he wears contacts and he has kissable lips, he has scars on his chest and a bullet scar on his chest.

Personality ups: He's very protective of the people he loves, he's sweet, and he loves giving to people.

Personality downs: He feels like he needs disaline alot, that's why he joined the marines, he has a hot temper.

Pet Peeves: When people chew with their mouth open, liars, tattoos.

Other: Up for love
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™




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Name: Tyler "Ty" Gardener
Age: 23
Occupation: Bartender and part-time drummer in a small local band.
Hobbies: Playing the drums, painting, surfing.

Appearance:
~Picture
~Hair: Short, dark brown. Almost black.
~Eyes: Light blue
~Height: 5' 11"
~Build: Slim/Slender
~Skin Tone: Lightly tanned
~Clothes: Normally just a plain black t-shirt and jeans with flip-flops, or barefoot.
~Marks: A small, pale scar above his right eye. Not very noticeable unless pointed out or examined closely.

Personality ups:He stays calm in most situations and has the ability to look beyond his own little world and try to help others with their problems as best he can. He's usually very kind and caring.
Personality downs: He's a trouble-maker and his sharp tongue doesn't help him any. He's also a compulsive liar, though he doesn't try to be.
Pet Peeves: Posers/fakes and control freaks.

Other: He's obsessed with fire.
Be the cartoon heart. Light a fire, light a spark. Light a fire, flame in my heart. We'll run wild, we'll be glowing in the dark.




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Is there room for one more? Sorry. I suck at math.

If so...

Name: Sophie Emberly

Age: 21

Occupation: Photographer for Poppy United Magazine

Hobbies: Snowboarding (when she gets the chance), listening to music, playing guitar, taking morning jogs

Appearance: http://osnafotos.deviantart.com/art/Cant-take-my-94842163 Her hair is an espresso brown, her eyes are deep blue, and she is 5'8 and very slender. Her skin is beige/gold. She has a tat of a mountain lion across her lower back.

Personality: Ups- She's a wild child, cheerful, full of energy, and always optimistic Downs- Her fearlessness leaves her in sticky, uncontrollable situations of danger, and she always needs to be rescued

Pet peeves: She hates when people pick wedgies.

Other: I call Aiden!!!!
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***That is fine *singerofthenight* ****

Can we start now??
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Sorry Jacob, I wasn't on when everybody put their things in there isn't an extra space sorry!

Claire sat at her sewing table pulling the threads on her material to make a gather. She hoped it would look right on the new dress she was making. Her cell phone buzzed, signaling time to go to work. She got up and went to run a brush through her hair quickly.

Hope you have fun at work today. Ty's voice sounded in her head. She did her best to ignore it focusing instead on each brush stroke. Claire liked the idea that she could hear other people's thoughts. At least more so than she had when she first started hearing the voices. Diagnosed skitsophrenic, and even the medicine didn't help.

Pleasent to know we're not all skitso's isn't it? Grey's voice sounded this time.

Kind of annoying actually. Claire thought. I'm doing my best to ignore you guys today. But you're shouting your thoughts.

I'll work on that.
Ty's voice was the last Claire paid attention to, she put her headphones in her ears and focused on the music instead of the others.
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((Chloe Starks))

The rhythmic sound of an axe sounded through the grounds along with Chloe's pure singing. The two sounds intertwined, becoming a new uplifting tune.

"Can you feel (thud) the river run? (thud)
Waves are dan(thud)cing to the sun (thud)
Take the tide (thud) and face the sea (thud)
And find a way (thud) to follow me. (thud)"

A sigh. Could we perhaps turn the volume down a bit, Chloe?

Chloe scowled and hauled her axe so it rested on her shoulder. Suddenly she grinned mischievously and kicked the next piece of wood into position. Her arms made the axe go into motion again, swinging rhythmically against the obnoxious tune in her head.

This time it was a groan instead of a sigh. Very funny. Maybe I should find you and start chopping you instead of that wood.

Chloe laughed and finished chopping the last piece of wood, sticking the axe into the stump. You couldn't pick this up, Sissy.

Could too. Sissy debated. I may be skinny but I'm not a wimp.

Arm wrestle me. I dare ya. Chloe threatened as she stacked up the wood into a wheel barrow. She picked up the handles and wheeled it towards the barn. Chloe opened the barn door and proceeded into the back. A sturdier door led to the cement room which held the furnace. Chloe tipped the cart next to the room and left. She jogged down the long isle of horses and cows until she made it to the barn door.

Inside the last stall stood a cremello Morgan mare. Chloe smiled and laid her hand on the horses jaw.

To ride, or not to ride! That, my dear Chloe, is the question!

Ty. Of course, Chloe laughed.

Who else would it be? Ty asked.

Us. Came the response from five others.

Chloe could feel Ty grinning internally. Oh yeah, forgot about you guys.

Chloe chuckled as she opened her horses stall, grabbing the bitless bridle before leading her out of the barn. I don't see how you could've.

Ty thought a moment. Neither do I. Must've slipped my mind.

A quick jump led Chloe onto Trinket's bare back. She gripped the mane above the whithers and clicked her into motion. If anyone would like to join me I'll be on top of Blue's Hillock.

With that Chloe squeezed Trinket's ribs and eased her into a trot towards Blue's Hillock.




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Isabella Milan

I smiled to myself, listening to the others in my head, not really saying much at all.

You guys are silly, I commented as I left my apartment.

Yeah and so are you, Clair said, obviously annoyed by the sudden disruption. I chuckled to myself, putting in my headphones and jogging down the street.

Going to see Tyler? Sissy teased. I smiled, knowing they all knew exactly how I felt. It was rather annoying, and could make for some awkwardness depending on the situation, but nothing could be done about it.

Yeah, I am, I finally replied, knowing Tyler would be jumping into the conversation at any point in time.

Oh really? there he was, his voice echoing through my head, as well as the others.
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