Power to the Story

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Well, folks, I could use some help. I'm working on a story where electric power doesn't exist.
The problem is, I'm not sure what to replace it with. Thoughts?
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What about water and windmills errr...
True love, in all it’s celestial charm, and
star-crossed ways, only exist in a writer’s
mind, for humans have not yet learned
how to manifest it.




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The obvious for fantasy is magic, but seeing as you're asking, I'm going to guess you haven't got magic in your story.

I agree with Angel - water is the obvious choice. Electricity for what, though? Just light, or telephones too? Because the amount of energy provided by a energy source and the energy needed is dependent on the energy intake, if that made sense. :P




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Hmm...electricity is a form of energy, so I would say that you should go with a different form of energy, like heat or light.




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Maybe spiritual power or something? But I'm not sure how that would fit since I don't know much about the story.



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