Daniel
"Are you sure we should do this?" asked Alice sheepishly. "Relax, Al, it's not gonna work anyway" I reassured her. But I was scared too. If this worked, what would it mean? I did not want to find out. In fact, if Jennifer wasn't my best friend, I would have left her house already. "Okay guys, are you ready!" whispered Jennifer. Alice and I nodded our heads and followed Jennifer in to her bathroom. She turned off the lights, flushed the toilet three times, and started whisper-chanting "Girl in the mirror, come on out"
Alice was shaking, even though it was 80 degrees in there. I started to laugh. They are so dumb. Then, despite the heat that controlled the air, a chilly breeze went by, but the window was closed. All of a sudden, It grew pitch black except for the blue fog. By now I was shaking uncontrollably. But I was the only one. Alice was fanning her face. I started to turn to a still chanting Jennifer, when I felt a Deep stabbing sensation in the back of my leg. Blood was streaming down, I could feel it. Soon, I saw her staring at me - long black hair, blue eyes, a white gown, and covered in blood. I started to scream. Jennifer stopped and tried to turn on the lights, but now the sensation was all over. The girl was pulling me towards the mirror, Squeezing and scratching me all over, drawing more blood. The lights came on, and it all stopped. "Daniel! What happened!" screeched Jennifer. She pulled out my arms- they were cut up and scratched, with a bloody hand print. A giant cut was on the back of my leg. "The girl! She- She came!" I yelled between sobs. "I'm getting the hell out of here!" Shouted Alice. She stomped in to Jennifer's room. I was crying hysterically. Jennifer threw her hands up in the air. "Well what the hell am I gonna tell my mom! 'A ghost came and attacked Daniel' She can't know we did this!" Alice came back "Break your mirror, and get your mom" Jennifer scowled and opened her mouth to object, but Alice took her foot and kicked it, then threw the magazine basket at it. "Mrs. Jaskins! Mrs. Jaskins!" Screeched Alice running down the stairs. Jennifer then covered me in the broken glass, and stuck some in her own arms and screamed. Mrs. Jaskin's bandaged me and Jennifer up and let me and Alice go home. I thought this would be the end of the girl in the mirror, but it was only the beginning...
But other than that I liked it a lot.
