Im sorry but you really need to work on the whole body figure, find some books and learn, try doing a skeleton first and get rid of the sketchy lines by using your elbow instead of your hand. (I do it to )
your anime style isn't as clean cut as you normally see, which is why i like it. it's individual; probably reflects a laid-back personality. again, the facial expresssions make my socks rock i'm gonna go look at the rest
i like these, you did a great job showing there expressions. the face is very important. i like how it is not perfectly lined. it shows you did a quick draw. and that is cool and very hard to do.
you are a very good artist.
This is excellent!
I mean, you could fix it up a bit, but for a quick draw, this is stunning. I love the facial expressions especially. One thing that bugged me was that the people are on a slant, kind of. But the clothes were really cool and overall this was really neato.
Cheers,
Ayra
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