Dream Again

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*This song sounds better if a guy sings it, but girls can also sing it. Go Unisex Songs!! LOL But, really, I wrote it for my friend to sing, but he's so freaking stubborn! Enjoy!*

DREAM AGAIN

All this time I've been building walls around me,
In this dark world where no one can ever find me.
Sometimes these walls don't keep people out,
They try to break them down.
So far they've all failed but you succeeded somehow,
And you won't let me repair the holes so I’m begging you.
Get a little anxious sometimes,
Afraid you will go and I'll be left alone,
And you'd be happy to go away that's what I'd pray.
Don't follow your heart cause it'd just lead you back to me,
I don't want to drag you down.

I want to go back to,
Believing everything and knowing nothing.
Your hopes are so high that my kiss might ruin them.
So won't you release me,
So you can dream again.

It's only in the silence of the hour,
That I can hear you screaming cause you are alone.
We don't need this connection,
But you seem to want it though it's bad for you.
Sitting in this dark room,
Broken and alone I am,
Just a shell of the human I thought I was.
And you're a puppet with broken strings.

I want to go back to,
Believing everything and knowing nothing.
Your hopes are so high that my kiss might ruin them.
So won't you release me,
So you can dream again.

This is where you should say you've had enough.
We shouldn't feel like this toward each other.
Thanks for pulling you into my world is the wrong thing to say,
Because you should see I'm not worth the time.
But you believe in me so much,
I’m dying to hear your voice say my name.

I know you need me.
You know I want you.
This couldn't go unnoticed forever.
And I'd rather die,
Than not be with you.
In a twisted way this is how I protect you,
From myself.
I’m not that strong,
To let you walk away alone.
You've made your choice.
I’ll wait for you here,
Because you want to give me a chance.
I promise.
I promise.

I want to go back to,
Believing everything and knowing nothing.
Your hopes are so high that my kiss might ruin them.
I want to go back to
Believing everything and knowing nothing.
So won't you release me,
So you can dream again.
So won't you release me,
So you can dream again.
So won't you release me,
So you can dream again.
Believing everything and knowing nothing.
Last edited by KBrowlingmeyerFAN on Sun Jul 20, 2008 12:46 am, edited 1 time in total.
I'm Betting On Alice.

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Hi!

I'll edit this later to review, since I have to go. But one suggestion, don't do the full caps, because now my eyes hurt. @__@
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.




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I have to second firearris. Please, don't use all caps, and write your songs in verse like normal people. Rather than using a slash, make an actual line break. It will be a lot easier to read, and then I might make some effort to give a real review.
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*gags*

This. This is why I tell people don't write in all caps. I literally cannot read it until you change it. Also, please space it out.
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yeah, sorry about the all caps.

my keyboard was jammed and i didn't catch it.

& i've been out at rehearsals so i couldn't change it.
but i'm working on it.
I'm Betting On Alice.

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