Need Mucho Reviews

Me again!

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Please, It's a very short poem.


I do like gold stars!

wiseman, took care of yours.

Sorry about it's brevity. I'm no good at poems, and don't post a lot when something's good anyway.

Thank You Note to Donny

Just posted and could use a few pointers. Thanks, dude.

-Jared

Hi, I'm back. Thanks for the review, but could you please help with the second chapter? It really needs to be ripped to shreds. Thanks in advance!

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Bear, Jamie, got yours taken care of.

Who's next?

Greyhound

Your critiques of the Siren series were most helpful.

-Kylan

Got your story, Kylan.

Next contestant, step right up.

Hello, would you be so kind to review the opening of my novel? Thanks in advance.

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Could you review the short story in my sig? It's a bit unsettling, but it's supposed to be accurate portrayal of someone who's living with Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder.

I'd really like advice on whether or not I'm getting the right emotions across, and whether or not it goes at a good pace. But other than that I'd love comments on anything.

[s]BlackGhost[/s]

Reason, Ghost, I got yours done.

Con, my buddy, who searches for the outside world with me... (if you remember XD)

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Please?

Critiqued your story, clo.

something kind of scavenger

For a contest, so it needs mucho help, please.

TL G-Wooster, yours has been critiqued.

Can you believe it? Me again

Ok, this time it is a Children's Story i am wanting to get published, but before i do i want it to be as good as it can be!



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Please and Thank You







---Jon---