a very good question

i dont know what you think but i like this poem. i was proud of the fact that i wrote it in a dream than woke up and wrote it down. tell me what you think.

There should be no such thing as love,
Or such a thing as hate.
I think we should put instinct above,
The search for a soul mate.
Cavemen had no need to date.
Why don’t we just procreate?

I liked it but as I just told you, reviewing poems are not my strong point. You wrote it in a dream? Awesome. I need to look up procreate. I liked it and everything made sense.

Hey!!

Interesting poem. I don't necessarily agree with your views but the structure of the poem was good and the words used well. It made sense and you conveyed your ideas well.

Good Job!

You really wrote this in a dream? Wow thats awesome. I'm quit found of this poem. All of it made sense and good word usage. Although I was thrown off a bit by the cavemen part.
Awesome job!