We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
We are the ink, we are the quill.
[The Ink And The Quill (Be Afraid) - Anti-Flag]
You have a really good structure, ever think of inking and coloring?
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.
Very funny. I agree, you should ink and colour it. Perhaps thicken the lines a bit to ad to the comic effect.
Also, just my opinion but if you scan it with colour maybe leave the bubbles blank and then add the text in with the computer. There is a font called Comic sans(At least on my Computer) that looks nice.
Just a suggestion.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?" ----Stupei, Ace Defective
