All say(don't know a good title..)

We all say
Hello
We all say
fast}are you sick, gotta go
Ah oh ah oh
Mm mm Mm mm
We all say
good day
We all say
fast}see you an another day
Mm mm Mm mm
Ah oh Ah oh
We all say
get well
We all say
fast}Hope you're felin' better now
Mm oh Mm oh
Ah mm Ah mm
We all say
Nice to see ya' now

It's supposed to be sung in a sing song voice and I didn't know how to um.. put down in words the humming and the ah and oh's. The Mm to mm means it goes from a more high hum to a lower hum. I hope this makes some sense.

It's to short. Also, what are you trying to say? good songs, at least to me, normally convey some kind of feeling or emotion or struggle. I think you need t add more to this, add verses, a chorus, ect. something else. Then I can give a better review.

The grammer and spelling seems good, so no errors there.

Hope this helped. Good critiquing.

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I don't know what to add to it. It's suposed to be like a nursery school song.

It's a bit short, but it's kind of cute. It doesn't really seem like the kind of thing kinda kids would sing, though. It's a bit... random.

fast}

I would get rid of these. They really threw me off so I couldn't sing it smoothly. And I didn't like the lines that were meant to be sung fast. When I tried, it didn't work.

This is alright, but I'd work on it. If you can sing it through, though, that's good.

Good luck.