A few pieces of mine

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Mini Cooper:

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Crane I drew for my little sister:
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Concorde: (This wasn't fun)
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Rearing Thoroughbred:
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Gulf stream:


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Like I said, most of these were done in a grand total of 5 minutes, when I was bored. I know they aren't great at all :D. Soon, I'll post more and some of my photography ^_^


And btw, some of my pictures are signed differently (BHR, Kiki, or June) but they are all done by me. (My various nicknames)
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These are great. I wish I could draw like you.

Mini Cooper- Not my favourite, but that's just my personal taste. It really does look like a car.

Crane- I think this one is really cool. It looks very life-like and I love the open mouth. I think it would be better if it was a bit bigger.

Concorde- It's a bit rough and wonky, but still great.

Horse- Wow! I know from experience tat horses are really hard to draw, and yours is really good. I think the face needs a bit more detail, I can't really feel anything and it looks a bit bland.

Gulf Stream- I think this is your best on. I like the angle. It looks sort of angry (I promise I'm not crazy).

Great pictures!
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i agree with chocoholic on every thing except that she didn't like the mini couper, i on the other hand loved it, that is one of my favorite cars!!!!!

the crane i liked but it was lop-sided

the horse i liked but i think that you should fix the teeth

and other than that i thought that they were all good

keep drawing, but take your time, i want to see what you can do when your being serious

pm me when you have more

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these drawings were great. i'd feel bad if i was too hard on you--seeing as to, i have no drawing abitlity what so ever.

i really liked the drawing of the mini cooper--even though i think the actual cars are ugly.

the crane drawing was really cool--with it's mouth open freakishly wide and all,

the horse was great. i used to try to draw horses...i guess they were okay, but they were more of cartoons than real sketches. and they're wicked hard to draw. yours is amazing and i didn't realize anything too bad with the face, though some more detail would improve it.

the concorde, well, i have no idea what an actual one would look like, but just assuming that you were on the right track, the sketch was a bit rough, but good all the same.

i think that the last plane...the gulf stream, i think it was called, was my favorite as well. the angle was probably a difficult one to draw, but it turned out wonderfully.

great pictures! i'd love to see what you could do with some real time!

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[size=large]FIVE MINUTES?![/size=large] WOW!

Mini Cooper - Very detailed (so many details in such short time! >I'm not worthy<)!

Crane - You should've put a shadow at the crane's feet. It looks like it's floating. But I do think it's cute. It's all lively, and I like the open mouth. It adds to the liveliness.

The Horse - WOW. If you want my opinion, I thought it was sooperdidoopertotallyawsomelyfabtasicalandsososocool. Not many people can draw horses that well at a very short period of time. WONDERFUL!

I'm running out of time, so I'll just say that all your drawings are great. Keep it up! :D
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i like the horse :) in kindergarten my sister drew a picture of a unicorn with no butt and a big fatty tail :) anyway...i really like the airplane, the horse, and the crane. The horse is really cool how it is only on two feet and making noises. you can actually hear him.or her...whatever. (i like your handwriting :) just thought i would throw that in there :))

i think that with some shading and maybe some backgrounds you could have really great peices of art :) not that you don't already...but you get it right?

in other words, these are really great :)

happy drawing :)
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Aw, those are adorable! I can see that you have a very steady hand--your lines are so clean!

The horse, especially, is beautiful.

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Mini Cooper: It's very smudgy, but I'm not sure if that's how you wanted it. I really love smudged stuff, because it makes it look softer. You know. Not quite as sharp of lines. On the inside of the car, it suddenly just... halts. Maybe have some very soft lines fade into the car, and not just halt. That detracts from the piece a lot. Otherwise good job. I love the detail you added to it.

Crane: It's good from the neck down. The head isn't that great at all. Expand on the eyes, and the beak. Right now it just look like something that has been thrown together. Make it look like you've spent hours on it. That's what art's about!

Concord: I like this, but it's too bland. I would suggest adding some detail on it. Maybe so more windows? What about a company's logo? Anything could make this plane a bit more interesting. Otherwise good job.

The Horse: It's very good and simple! This is my favorite out of all of them. As I just said, it's very simple and delicate, which I really like. Perhaps a bit more shading under the front legs?

Gulf Stream: Very good, but like the other plane, it's really bland. There's not much to it, other than the interesting view in which we are seeing it at.

Great job!

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Wow! These are all fantastic! My favorite is the one of the crane, his neck and beak are fantastic. The horse and the mini cooper are also very impressive, I can only imagine how long it took you to perfect them (or perhaps it took you no time at all? If so, let me say that I hate you, and all of your artistic talent!). Also, you're handwriting is beautiful!

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Whoa! When we were talking over PM you didn't tell me that you were an artist! I wish I had at least some artistic skills, but sadly, I don't.

Mini Cooper: I really like this one. I would suggest drawing an interior because it looks a bit weird when it is all detailed and then it gets to the inside and it is just blank.

Crane: Very, very nice. The legs and feet look a bit odd to me though, I'm not sure why.

Concorde: Ah, I love it! It isn't as detailed as some of the others but it is still great. I'm a plane person. =)

Horse: Awesome. The hindquarters seem a bit weird looking, at least in my opinion. Every time I try to draw horses, they end up looking like mutilated donkeys.

Gulf Stream: See what I wrote for Concorde.
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Wow! For five minutes, I think these are pretty amazing! I'm not a drawer, so to think that you can create something as awesome as these in 5 minutes is so cool! I think you did an amazing job, and these look so real. Keep drawing and posting them!
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wow i wish i could draw like that, i can draw ok i guess but im useless at horses and cars! that mini cooper was amazing - how did you do it? if i even attempted it it would be so wonky and not right, but you got it perfect and adding some colour to it would really lift it, if you know what i mean :P i liked the cane too, it looked like it was laughing! Though i think the legs are at a odd angle but thats what makes it unique :D great job - im gonna review some of your other stuff now!
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I can't believe you took only five minutes! Your works are all very good, I can't even draw like that. I like the Mini Cooper the most. ^^
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I hate you. you're too good. the mini is like, a miracle for five minutes.
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You're wrong. These are really good. It's cool that you can draw really good pictures in 5 minutes. You should add pictures more often. And maybe you could color one of the pictures. I think it would turn out really well.



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