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Desiding to start on a real book

myfreindsavamp · 2008-07-08T03:02:26Z

Okay, I've started writing this story that is right now called A New light on a Distant Shot. When a boy, Jessie was seven his sister died at the age of fifteen. Now he's fifteen and he's trying to figure out why his sister was killed. He spends his nights up and during the day he sleeps (even in class). No one's been able to stop him after his sister died so they leave it. He gets a C average anyways so who cares. He's not failing. Anyways back to subject. He slips into his sister's room and has always been taunted by a book shelf full of note books that are filled with his sister's handwriting. He pulls one out and then decides better of it. As he pushes the thing back a letter falls to the ground. It's addressed to him. When he reads it, it gives him permission to read them. This permission is from is sister. She herself expected she might be dead. Jessie starts to read his sister's life from about six months from her death and decided to type it up. He eventually send it off to a publisher and boom it's published. Now a group of people are a bit mad at him and people in his family start to die. In the end he's the only one left and- Wait. I can't tell you the whole story. The end is a cliff hanger but here I am finally starting. Yay! -Amber

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Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:46 pm

gamechanger10 says... · Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:46 pm

I'd be glad to help if you still need it!

I've finished a book recently and don't have much to do with my own works right now...

PM me!

-GC10

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Mon Jul 21, 2008 5:53 pm

Cobra says... · Mon Jul 21, 2008 5:53 pm

I know it's a bit late, but congratulations on starting. However, writing-especially part-time writing-takes a long time. Trust me. So good luck with your story. I'll be interested in seeing where that goes.

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Mon Jul 28, 2008 11:31 am

rubberduck says... · Mon Jul 28, 2008 11:31 am

Hey, Amber!

If you need any help, feel free to PM me, alright? ^^
I'd love to help you out in whatever way I can.

I'm normally not a praying man, but if you're up there, please save me Superman.
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Mon Jul 28, 2008 7:44 pm

myfreindsavamp says... · Mon Jul 28, 2008 7:44 pm

I'll send something to you ina few. Gotta go work out side rightnow.

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To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
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