I am hardly here beneath my feet

Beautifully written, really amazing images and feelings coming across. I love this poem, actually. It was long and I didn't get bored with it before the end. I love the feeling of flying and falling and trusting that you wrote into this.

truly epic piece, if i was you i would frame it,laminate it. Keep it safe until its published and i can purchase it =). It was strides ahead of most things i have read printed or not.
Good work, keep it up.


"We watch as if watching could save us,

but we ought to fear being a witness. We ought to know

what a witness must do. You told me"

-truly my favourite lines:off to reread it, i love the taste it leaves in my mouth.

Wow, Brad...just...wow. Why do you have to be so good at poetry? =.=

andimlovegalore wrote:Beautifully written, really amazing images and feelings coming across. I love this poem, actually. It was long and I didn't get bored with it before the end. I love the feeling of flying and falling and trusting that you wrote into this.

Exactly. Really strong feelings and images..and I also tend to get bored reading long poems, but not with this one!

Great job Brad.

Wow, this is really good. I love the title.
Its long, but it didn't loose its interest.
The end is amazing!!
I'm jelous.
Keep writing, you rock

oh my. this is such a nice piece. great job. it was a long poem but i didnt get bored at all. when you can write a long poem and keep people interested, then you have talent. i wanted to quote my favorite stanza but i just couldnt choose. great job!