Lollipops make you smile

This is actually poems I created in 10th grade. I couldn't put this in the other poem section for some reason. But, I hope y'all like it!

That... is amazing! Pretty original thinking my friend. So cute. Now it just needs a better background. Come on, you can do better than white!
I might make one of these myself in my frequent times of homework-related-break-downs resulting in utter boredom. Good idea.

Thanks, I was afraid of putting a backgroud to it because I thought it would clash with the other colors.

I'm going to try to make another one, but I don't know what the subject should be. Any suggestions?

i liked these two but i liked the lolly pop better that the smiley face, i think that there should have been more to the lolly pop. good work!
---Jon---

Thanks. I do like the lollipop better also.