the unknown

What is this seem to be?
What does it mean?
What does it want?
What does it need from me?


I know, PEER EVALUATION........I don't know what everyone else is picturing in their mind, but I'm picking up a lot of sexual tension. Sounds like Sex, Sex, Sex to me.

"Groaning, swaying" at your feet. I know it may not be what you intended for the reader to pick up, but you yourself must admit that this poem could be perceived in such a form. It's not just me, can't say sex is on my mind right now. just picked it up here

"You go deeper in, as it comes out"

haha, Eureka........Someone needs sexual healing.

uhhh.........not really. scribblingquill was more on to it.

I guess it could be perceived as that, but that is not what the poem is about

I understand it's not what it's about.


But everyone will have their own perception. Wasn't trying to attack or criticize, sorry if it sounded that way.