Ocean Song

This is different from the other Ocean Song. It just happened that we picked the same title. I would have changed it, but it's so perfect that I had to keep it. Sorry if it causes and confusion.

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A silent song from the coast,
Sings to those the ocean loves,
And to those who love the ocean,
It calls to them,
It sings softly of beauty and peace,
It sings of life,
It sings of love,
Love of the waves that crash on the sand,
Love of the seaweed that dances in the water,
Love of the salty air grazing the sea,
The song of the ocean beckons you,
Sings to you,
Listen and sing with it,
Enjoy the beauty,
Enjoy the peace,
Love the waves,
Love the seaweed,
Love the salt air,
And love the ocean as you sing with it.

this poem is very...graceful...so to speak. it has a nice, soft flow about it that is--in a way--calming.
thats about all there is to say.

Beautiful work. Good job.

"A silent song from the coast,

Sings to those the ocean loves,

And to those who love the ocean,"

That was my favorite line. I liked the imagery here. I could hear the ocean in these lines. Very Good!

Thank you very much for reading it! I'm so glad you like it! Thanks.
-Rhiine

WOW! I love that poem! (even if I don't have one and its for Kellie... ) I love the imagination and graceful flow of the sentences.

The song of the ocean beckons you,

Sings to you,

Listen and sing with it,

It sounds so.. mysterious. Haunted even... very good! you have a knack for writing, darling!