You Think You Know Me

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Monki
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Sat Jun 21, 2008 9:13 pm
Monki says... · Sat Jun 21, 2008 9:13 pm
Oh my God! Thank you all so much! I can't believe this poem is being liked by so many! It was meant to be short but have a really strong meaning and I guess I did hit home with this one. Thank you all so much.

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Monki

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Tom Riddle: "You read my diary?"
Harry Potter: "At first, I did not know it was your diary. I thought it was a very sad, handwritten book."
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Angel of Death
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Fri Jul 11, 2008 1:06 am
Angel of Death says... · Fri Jul 11, 2008 1:06 am
This had rhythm and finality...it was simply powerful and real. The emotions that you portrayed are ones that millions of people feel. You wrote something that a lot of people can relate to and that's what else gave this poem its charm. Usually people overdo the rhyming (like I sometimes do...) but yours was perfect and it actually flowed well. I didn't see anything wrong with this and I'd suggest that you didn't make any changes because it is fine the way it is.
Bravo and keep writing,
Angel :D :D :D
True love, in all it’s celestial charm, and
star-crossed ways, only exist in a writer’s
mind, for humans have not yet learned
how to manifest it.
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Monki
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Fri Jul 11, 2008 11:31 am
Monki says... · Fri Jul 11, 2008 11:31 am
Wow. I don't know what else to say. I guess just wow and thank you. That's all I can say. :oops:

Thanks for the suggestion too. I guess I won't 'edit' or change it. :)

<3,
Monki
Tom Riddle: "You read my diary?"
Harry Potter: "At first, I did not know it was your diary. I thought it was a very sad, handwritten book."
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