Bridezillas

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Snoink
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Mon Jun 02, 2008 7:24 pm
Snoink says... · Mon Jun 02, 2008 7:24 pm
Awww... this is cute. I like it. Very Shel Silverstein-esque. If the ending wasn't so funny, mind you, it wouldn't work at all, but this was very fun.

The only thing I tripped on was this:


I can’t believe that my own friends
Forgot about my wedding!

We had no evidence that her friends forgot, so I got slightly confused.

Anyway, I liked this! Good job! :D
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Sat Jul 19, 2008 6:56 pm
-Save-Ferris- says... · Sat Jul 19, 2008 6:56 pm
Haha this was funny.

Yeah it was definately a relief from much more darker stuff.

I agree though the whole poem being written as someone talking, hmm didn't tickle me fancy >.<


Yeah and also what Snoink said. When did the friends forget about her wedding? :/


Anyway you made me laugh at the end so bonus points to you :D
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Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
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