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OverEasy · 2008-05-08T23:13:03Z

So this was a class project, write a poem containing the media and people. It's due monday so if you guys could give me a little feed back before I throw it into the lions den of my class that would be great! Stupid little worms, that’s what they really are. Pathetic fuzzy sheep parading around, following the trends. Why form their own opinions when the media hands them out for free? Thinking for themselves is a preposterous idea. Self centered, obnoxious, insulting little comments spew from their mouths like vomit of the tongue. My head pulsates from the incessant drabble spilling from the holes in their faces. One simple idea of their own impossible as the blue screen fills their heads with the way things should be done. The way things should be seen. The news fills with stories of the children of today. One has beaten another in a locker room, the whole thing caught on tape! Posted for the world to see on youtube of all things. Is this the future of this world?

harrypotterbooklover101

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Tue May 13, 2008 2:40 pm

harrypotterbooklover101 says... · Tue May 13, 2008 2:40 pm

Hmm.... This was funny and kinda gorss at the same time but,if I was a reading teacher I whould probley give that a b.

To make this pome a little bit more exsided u should make it a ryming pome.

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Wed May 14, 2008 2:25 am

thanatosdeath says... · Wed May 14, 2008 2:25 am

Great play of words, could be spaced though (just my opinion), I couldn't read very clearly...Overall it was good...

Great desciption too!

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