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Tiny Hands, Tiny Feet
For Melissa and Ashton
By Ailam Remard
She only got two hours,
To hold her baby boy,
To look into his eyes,
Too see his tiny hands and tiny feet.
She savored every moment,
That she was with him,
For she knew his time was running short,
And he soon would be on his way.
A ten hour labor,
And all she got was this,
Just two hours of her precious baby,
She’d fallen in love with.
It didn’t seem fair,
To lose such a precious thing,
One that had a future,
That might do extraordinary things.
But God had a plan for him,
A plan that would send him back home,
So she loved her baby, Ashton,
Until he had to go.
She told him to be a good boy,
To respect his Father in Heaven,
And to look after his brother and sisters,
She would eventually have and fall in love with.
And then his spirit slipped away,
And flew high up to Heaven,
Where a Father wait with open arms,
That he would hold him with.
And then he looked down at his mother,
Who lay weeping in the hospital bed,
A tear slid down his face,
And he reached out to touch her.
And she might have felt it,
For the touch was so soft,
The touch of a tiny hand trying to comfort his mother,
That belonged to her baby with tiny hands and tiny feet.
I NEED SUGGESTIONS MAJORLY! TELL ME WHAT I DID WRONG AND HELP ME FIX THIS! I NEED TO GET IT PERFECT!
