High School Students

ok. well.....not happy here. in the first line delete the 2nd "are"

and...well...it doesn't sound like a poem. but try to revise it, it could get somewhere! i love the idea!

Cat_Lover_23

First off, it's an awesome thing that you are trying to write. You've got some real talent here. This is a good idea for a poem, though I think it could be be lengthened and detail could be added. Why don't you try adding detail and, like some of the others said, answer the questions you ask. But don't stop writing! Take the critism given to you and use it to improve your writing. Don't completely conform to it, though. Let your personality into it. Remember, Albert Einstien's teacher thought he was a bad student. All genius's fail at one time or the other.

Is this supposed to be a poem?:smt101

Why are high school students are crazy?
Are they picking on a nerd or are they caught up in being popular?
Do they what want to fail or accomplish something in their life?
Are they jocks or geeks? No matter what they are - they are still crazy.

Why are high school students crazy?
Are they picking on a nerd or are they caught up in being popular?
Do they want to fail or accomplish something in their life?
Are they jocks or geeks? No matter what they are, they are still crazy.

ta- daaa


Try harder

Rodhead wrote:Try harder

The same could be said of your efforts to find relevant reviewing material.

Seriously, people, check the date of the original post before you respond.