Jasmine's Poetry Critiquing Garden

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I'll critique poetry if you pop the links here. I tend to avoid soppy love poetry...I personally don't like it so it's hard for me to be objective. I tend to be quite detailed in my feedback, and am precise about words and rhythm and avoiding cliches, but I'm one of those "If you can't say anything nice..." people, at least with writing, so I will always praise something. (There's always something to praise!)

I'd appreciate it if you'd pm me after putting the link here, as I may forget about this thread...
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With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes springing high,
Still I'll rise."
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Hello :)
So I hear you are interested in poetry analysis...
Please please have a look at my work, it is titled 'Reflections of a Nomad' and will appear soon in a journal of young peoples poetry in New Zealand.
Thanks
the link is:
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