Republic Commando

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The basic plot is you are a clone in the Republic army. You are not just any type of clone, you are special forces otherwise known as Republic Commandos. The character will be put through battle after battle against the CIS and other rebellion factions. If you have read any of the Republic Commando books you would get where I am going with this.

There are some character limitations here.
1. if you chose to be a clone you must be 11 years old. (their growth is accelerated so they are virtually 22)
2. All clones are of coarse guys
3. Even if you are a clone (its a big break) you may be up for love
Isn't Star Wars the best
4. There are no superpowers
5. No god likes either
6. No magic
7. here is where you branch out. If you have seen Star Wars movies there are tons of different races. More than we have ever seen. So if you don't want to be human (Clones are human) you can make up a bipedal race.

I would prefer only one player per person unless we get less than 10 people join.

1 Jedi is needed (only person with powers. The force and a light saber)
As many Clones as possible
As many non Clones as possible

I would really appreciate no classic Star Wars name be used. example.
1. Han Solo for a Clone Commando. two problems right there. we know Han Solo wasn't a clone and its 20 years before he came into play.

All you need is a basic understanding of Star Wars to join like that there is a darkside and the Jedi.

You need a name (Clones have names too)
Age (Clone are 11)
Gender (Clones are all male)
Height (Clones are about 6 feet)
Weight (This is where Clones begin to very a bit)

Other information

History
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**this looks awesome i'll edit this post later with my profile!**

EDIT:
Name: Tyris
Gender: Male
Age:11
Appearance: (for those of you who don't know what all the clones look like) face, republic commando
Personality: follows any orders without question(of course), tends to be a lot less stiff than most of the clones, skilled with a gun(hardly misses), in good physical condition(duh), helpful, energetic, jokes around
History: a Republic commando, sniper in his squad(Zall's squad), tends to get in trouble for joking around, his squad knows they can rely on him to be everywhere at once.
Other: up for love
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OMG! I love Star Wars! I wanna be a Jedi! But i wanna be Yoda....oh well can i still be a human and be a jedi? if nto just tell me

Name: Misaca (prononced Miss-sha-ca)
Age: 21
Gender: hmmm Female of course.
Height: same as me..heeh 5'6
Race: Jedi
Appearance: She sort of resembles the queen in episode two of Star Wars. Penelope I think was her name...the one Anikin married in the end.
History: discovered her power when she was young....orphaned. Took in by the Jedi and was trained.
Other: Up for love.


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**Ooh! Yay!**

Name: Keira Sivron

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Height: 5'10 (shorter than most)

Race: Twi'lek

Race Discription: Twi'lek females are prized for their natural beauty and gracefulness. They are frequently sold into slavery as dancers for crimelords, while others take jobs to dance at cantinas.

Appearance:Here

History: The daughter of Tol Sivron. She ran away after the capital was inveded because many of the Twi'leks blamed her father for it. She was captured by a cantina owner and is forced to dance for and 'please' many. She's planning an escape soon.

Other: Up for love
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yeah, the characters are great. I was just considering shutting it down if no one join. Now that I have three I guess I will leave it for others to join.
Okay, my Character will be a Clone. of course.

Name: Zall
Age: 11
Gender: Male
Height: 6'
Weight: 165 lbs
Other Info: Is a Republic Commando. He has a scar over his left eye form where his Sargent Vau all most killed him during training. He is the demolitions man in a squad of three other commandos.

History: Is a clone and has never left Kamino in his life, so far.
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okay i edited my post and just so you know my brother's gonna join the storybook sometime soon...

but i need to point out two very minor things that are just really bugging me.

1) Hon is actually spelled Han. Han Solo.

2) lol, Annakin's wife is named Padme, not Penelope!

That's all. Sorry for being such a nerd. XD




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Cat you think you're a nerd? Want to have a nerd-off? My money is on me. Even though I don't gamble. Because that wouldn't be gambling.

*ahem*

Name:Vestron Devondre'
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Species: Iridonian Zabrak
Height: 6 ft (like me! and I'm not done growing! MWAHahahaha!)
Appearance:Like this guy... without the lines. Think bald and with the horns. (Wait...would that be bald?)
Personality: Calm, tactical, sarcastic, kind of quiet (not shy quiet)
History: A mercenary stealthmaster that takes on a job trying to sneak into kamino. Born on Iridonia and was always good at sneaking up on his friends. Due to his agility and stamina, he joined a mercenary crew consisting of his friends. They were all killed but he continued mercenary work without them. He has no living relatives.
Other: Sure, like me. (Meaning up for love people!)
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*rolls eyes at imperial1scout*

I have a few questions...

1) When do we start?

2) Could we have 2 characters?

3) Could you perhaps create a DT?




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I was waiting for te start to be when someone asked

Since we only have a few people we can have 2 characters

sure I will get right to making one!
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Clones are being trained by the millions on a planet covered in water called Kamino. None of the clones even know that there is life beyond the GAR (Grand Army of the Republic) They have been sitting in a cloning pod for two years and training for the other nine, honing their combat skills waiting for the first day of deployment. It is planned for a little more than a week and the Commandos are going to train until the invasion force goes ground side.

Zall's Team leader was doing an marvelous job of getting his team pinned down by a simulation droid.

"Zall, we need a round on that droid now!" Lever barked. He sounded just like Vau did when he tore you a new one.

"So does that mean I'm not supposed to be the distraction any more." Zall replied laughing.

"Do it now" lever yelled into his helmet mike.

Zall put the droid in the center of the targeting reticule. It flashed red one time to confirm the target the a second time to confirm lock. The rocket launched from the tube slamming the droid dead center chest. "Supers are the fun ones, Lever" Zall said as the smoke cleared and the simulation ended.

"Don't do it again." Lever barked back.

Blu came over from where his simulated cover previous had been. "He was just playing with it sarge."

Lever unsealed his helmet revealing a scarred face. Live fire was not the way to train kids, but it should did convince them to keep their head down. "You could have gotten us killed." He yelled.

"Sorry sarge. It won't happen again. I swear." Zall said and walked out of the simulation room on to deck twelve of the star ship Golden Escape.

Geonisis was on the door step and the droids were waiting. Was the GAR ready or not.
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Ooh...church looks like you got someone like Scorch as your character (you have played the game, right? The books misrepresent Delta Squad.) I'll do my part later...I need a little more plot going on before I can put my guy in... just throwing him on Kamino would be kinda random if you get what I'm saying.
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yeah, I have played the game and they are not on kamino but on the golden escape.
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Yeah, but that's where my character would be headed.
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For my second charachter I want to have Blu

Name: Blu
Age: 11
Gander: Male
Height: 6'
Weight: 167 lbs
Other: He is a republic Commando "Tech Specialist" in Zall's and Tyris's squad. He also doubles in rece.

History: Really thinks Vau should shove it and crawl in a hole and die. Ohter wise he cracks very lame jokes knowing that they lift team spirt.
Last edited by Church on Sat Apr 19, 2008 8:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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**Umm, my character was supposed to be the sniper in Zall's squad? ^**



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