The alleys began to clear of its shadows as the sun peaked its way over the distant horizon. I jogged towards my house, nearly ending my early morning run.
As I passed yet another alley something caught my attention. Halting to a stop, I edged closer to see what had caught my attention. A cold breeze blew past me, making my black baggy jogging shorts flutter.
You also tell instead of showing. You start by telling us. Whereas a lot of this could be easily shown. Another thing is you very often use the name of them, a personal pronoun would work fine rather than telling us. This seems highly unrealistic and doesn't hook the readers. You lump all description together stopping and halting flow to tell us how they where you could just trickle it in slowly build a picture. Imagine your painting you don't do it all at once you do it slowly. That's what an author is you paint a picture with words rather than paint.
Overall: This needs a huge overhaul and maybe read the writing tutorial so you can become better. Hope this helps.
Good luck
VSN
