Tell-y tell-y tell-ephone! See the tell-evision on. Tune the tell-emarketer And make 'im tell all. Tell-y tell-y tell-y tell-y telly all all!
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
One of the best chocolate-induced poems ever. *bows humbly* Thank you...
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
Hi Snoink, I really love this poem. Although I don’t think it is your best work I still like it. It is very catchy, in fact in reminds me of the Lady GaGa song, Telephone! How ever that song was not released until 4-5 years later. I actually like it. It is a very short and cute poem!! Maybe next time make it a bit longer although I can not criticize a master of YWS. It is very funny, how you described the telephone. I really like how you have broken up the words... "Tell-y tell-y tell-ephone!"- GREAT! Thanx, watchmeburn
"The early bird gets the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese."
No offence, but this is a little strange. Don’t get me wrong - I like strange.
One thing that this piece has done is make someone think about how often we use the word “tell”. We use it in TELLephone, TELLevision, TELLemarketer, and various other communication devices; the word ‘tell’ obviously meaning something to do with words.
Anyway, I’m rambling on... umm...
Not really much I can actually say about this piece, so I’ll pretend to shake your hand and slowly step away. lol haha
And I agree - best chocolate-induced poem yet. Although I will ask you this - what do you think you could come up with if you were alcohol-induced? haha lol OR both alcohol- AND chocolate-induced? HAHAHA
But seriously... for health reasons, you’d probably better not try that.
Actually, alcohol just gets calmer, so that wouldn't be good for crazy stupid poems. But I think that when this was written nearly six years ago, I was kind of making fun of this one guy on YWS (he's studying up to be a physicist now!) who was all, "YOU CAN'T WRITE A POEM!" And I was all, "YES I CAN." It was pretty epic!
And Lady Gaga totally stole this from me, lol. This came before her song!
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
*looks confused* This is different, I like differeent. I don't really get the point of this poem. Keep writing!
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