the vampir legacy

ok if you read my attempt at the story its not very good... so i wanna make it a story book. i'll give you the basic plot. a young girl is half vampire half werewolf. she is an assassin of the highest degree. as in millions for a person.her parents were murdered because a spy had followed her home and a war lord in the underworld wanted her dead. they had killed her parents to get to her noe she's out for revenge but more than revenge rests on her shoulders the fate of the planet because the evil war lord<melix> plans to capture and kill all the world leaders so he can rule over the planet...

there are a total of fourfferent gangs in the under world.

the hornet>run by melix their evil to the bone a mix of werewolves and vampires set on world domination.china

the luna gang- run by me,were assassins and were like the underworld cops.
south america

the new moon gang is a gang of werewolves in canada. they keep to themselves mostly but if you invade on their turf your dinner.

the imperials- kinda like royalty but snobbish there are a few good ones though.egypt

you can be vampirwe or werewolf or a mix of both.

name:
sex:
weapons:
history:
personality:
general information:
gang:






name:selena

sex:female

weapons:glaive and twin swords also a longbow

history:ruler of the luna gang she wants revenge on melix the evil chinese
warlord who had her parents killed

personality:sweet but deadly

general information:silver blue eyes tall slender curvy figure

gang:luna

**For future reference, PM for help with your writing skills. (I'll be nice.) And do not use <> as parentheses ---> () ! It looks retarded!! Also, try to avoid god modeling characters, even your own! XD lol

Name: Audra
Sex: female
Weapons: Is good with knives, her fists and feet, and rifles.
History: She was orphaned by one of Melix's raids.
Personality: Is pretty calm and stoic most of the time, but can be mischevious and playful without effort. She has a temper.
General information: She is a werewolf. Pure and simple.
Gang: New Moon

name: Shiro Cullen

sex: male

weapons: a dagger and a handgun

history: his father- Michial Cullen is the ruler of The Imperials.

personality: Shiro isn't snobby and doesn't act so high and mighty as the others do. He wants to be normal- he is a vampire.

general information: Vampire. Pure blooded. Up for love!

gang: the imperials- he is thier prince.

appearance: http://mincedniku.deviantart.com/art/Prince-14349369

*I'm going to post a profile tomorrow if that's okay! *

**the reason it was so bad is because the bell rang for the end of break miss know it all.i couldn't finish!! and yes you can be a hybrid and be an any group you want**

selena~

I snuck up on my next target, a killer vampire with over a hundred victims of his own. Ruthless and part of the Hornet Gang, I could not underestimate him. I crept up, silently, behind him, and, in a matter of seconds, had slit his throat.

Burning the remains, I thought, One down, over two thousand to go.

**If we're a hybrid do we have to be in the hornets?**

Name: Keira Sivron

Sex: Female

Race: Hybrid (Half and half)

Weapons: A dagger, teeth, nails, and a pistol

History: Not much of one...she a hybrid (half and half) so she has to prove herself to the leader more than usually.

Personality: Hates people who think they're better than everyone else. Nuff said

Gang: The Imperials

Appearance: Sorta like this...

selena~

i snuck up on my victim. my last job of the night was a killer vampire with a total of 134 victims. he was ruthless. He was part of the hornet gang. since we were at war with them i was killing all who i came across. i snuck up silently behind him and slit his throat, quick and clean. as i burned the remains i smiled 1 down 2,342 to go i thought sarcasticly

WHOA!!! Hold up!!! ***Everyone else, ignore this post.***

Savannah, this needs work. I will not lie to you! First off, you always start sentences with a capital letter!!!! Like this:

I snuck up on my victim. My last job of the night...

Et al, et cetera, and so on.

You don't put numerical numbers in a paragraph! SPELL IT OUT!!!

If it's a gang, capitalize it! You know what, just read the following.



I snuck up on my next target, a killer vampire with over a hundred victims of his own. Ruthless and part of the Hornet Gang, I could not underestimate him. I crept up, silently, behind him, and, in a matter of seconds, had slit his throat.

Burning the remains, I thought, One down, over two thousand to go.

Got it? I'll post my own thing later.

shiro Cullen-

With the cover of night, Shiro snuck out of his room and into the garage. He was going to take his motocycle and head to a dance club. He was going to have fun tonight no matter what!

Keira~

Keira stomped her foot on the back tire of Shiro's bike as he tried to pull out. "Going somewhere Princey?" She smiled, her teeth glistening in the dark. She heard Shiro grumble something unintelligable and stand up. "Don't worry Prince. I won't tell your papa." She snickered, removing her foot. "On one condition."

name: Cleodnie
race:SEXY vampire
sex: Female
weapons: fists,feet,legs, and sarcasm
history: unsure
personality: out-going but you mess with me (make me mad) and you will get HURT or KILLED
general information: i am who/what i am you don't like it go away
gang: undefined

Shiro-

He already knew her question. "Sure, you can come. "He grumled.

Keira smiled grabbing a helmet. Shiro already had his on.

"Which club? "She asked.

"The Metro dance club." Shiro answered.

Keira sat behind him and grabbed his waist, then Shiro opened the garage door and drove away.

Keira~

Right when they got in front of the dance club Keira flipped off the back right as it stopped. "I won't bother you this time." She smiled, striding into the club and disappearing into the crowd.

shiro Cullen-

She already knew the time they would leave- right when the club closes.

Shiro headed into the crowd. Instantly all the girls around him noticed him, some blushed, some exsamined him from afar, and others whispered comments about him.

Then a tall black haired girl, in a black short tight slim dress in red hiheels walked over to him. She placed her hand on his shoulder. "Wanna dance?" She asked.

He nodded. "Sure."

then they danced to the song.

i returned to my home. i needed to rest before i went out again.

*Sorry this took long! Er... Very long! *

name: Solomon Blodwyn

sex: male

weapons: teeth, fists, scythe

history: doesn't really remember

personality: stubborn, shy, sort of quiet, as his name suggest, very solemn, devious

general information: loves to fight, pure blood, up for love

gang: The Hornet

appearance: http://aramaki.deviantart.com/art/Trini ... l-10659687