Hello!!
I've read Cursed: Chapter One, but I'm a little confused about how this ties in (although I have my suspicions). Is this just another character viewpoint that is going to tie in with the character in your first chapter?
I really enjoyed reading this. The ending paragraphs (after Felix cut himself and was imagining Absynthe) really stood out from the rest of the chapter in the fact that they painted more of a picture for me and now I want to know what happens next!!!!
Hey thanks Geneeves!!! Lol i'm glad u liked it. Sorry about the words that say 't't after it, idk what happened. Lol if u were wondering, it will make sense in a few chapters, the firt chapter is kinda an epolouge. It will be from Felix & Absynthe's point of veiw. And i agree, the part where Felix cut is my favorite part too!
And fyi, ive never cut in my entire life, and i never would. I just thought it would be fun.
Why did you hit me?" he groaned groggily, blinking like an owl.
"Why are you in my bed!?" I countered, wriggling in embarrassment.
Absynthe! Still in love with it. I repeat you are an "Out of the box" Writer. I'm enjoy more and more you need to bring it all to school and like give it to me. I could read this like, how you read Twilight. I sware You and Clarie are going to be the next top writes in like 10 years. Who knows maybe less. Now you see why I always ask for your opinion for my book. You really can just get a part in a book and think... 1... 2... and. BAM! you know what is going to happen. Now to Part 2 of Chapter 2.
