The Hotel Royal

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Dusty---

"Alright." She smiled. He left and she jumped in the shower. She quickly cleaned off and then got dressed. She pulled on one of her favorite sun dresses and then let her hair hang down, it curled around her neck and she smiled at her refelextion. She slipped her sandles on then looked at the clock. SHe was done way a head of time. She went to the lobby anyways.
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Ryan:

I threw on a pair of jeans and a black T-shirt. I smiled when I saw Dusty. she looked beautiful. "Hungry?" I asked. I wanted to run my hands through that gorgeous hair, but refrained.




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Dusty--

"A little." She smiled, "Let's go, I heard there is this really nice lil' cafe down the street with great food." She grabbed his arm and pulled him out the door smiling.
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Ryan:

I laughed and let her lead me. It was nice, her arm in mine. Natural even. I could get used to this. I shook my head, trying to disentangle my thoughts. I had known her for one day! What was wrong with me?!




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Dusty---

Dusty saw the cafe and smiled, it was even cooler looking then she thought it woudl be. When they got inside they found a booth and she slid in across from Jonathon. "So, what all do you want to see around here?" SHe asked, she didn't care where they went. She just wanted to stay with him for some reason, it was odd.
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Ryan:

I smiled. "I'm looking at what I want to see." I said. Then blanched. had that really come out of my mouth?! I was such an idiot!




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Dusty---

Dusty blinked, once, twice. "Um," She didn't know what to say. Wait! That meant he liked her! She ran a hand through her hair. She didn't know what to say or do.


*grrrr*
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Grey-

Grey opened her eyes to see Brian staring at her. She probably looked like hell.
She smiled, "What?" she wasn't really a morning person.
"I'm sorry I havn't been all that much fun lately, my father has been on edge since my mother got sick and I've been trying to help. But my brother is coming today so today is your day." Brian was such a good guy, the best of the guys her father had set her up with in a long time. She felt so bad all the time because he was so honest and open with her and she couldn't even tell him that she liked reading books and that her favorite author Jane Austen, she was afraid he would be disappointed.
"Sounds good." She answered running her hand through is chin length black hair.
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They walked into a little cafe she had heard about from one of her friends and it was so much cooler than she had expected it to be.
"Hey Ryan!" Brian called spotting a young guy and girl sitting together in a booth, the girl was really pretty.
"Brian, I think they are on a date." she mumbled, her hand in his. But the guy waved them over.
"We'll just say hi, Ryan is a really cool guy." Brian mumbled back, leading her to the table.

*Sorry..I didn't have anything esle to do.*
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Ryan:

"Uh...hey." I greated. "How are you doing?" I asked. I didn't know what to say. I was suddenly uncomfortable. I wasn't used to being around people. I didn't feel comfortable around them. that's what my brother was for. I blended in the background while he took the spotlight. I hadn't realized until now that that was the way I liked it.




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(((I'm lost now, can you post for Jonathon?)))
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**that was Johnathon! Sorry! Too many sb names! Lol. That was supposed to be Johnathon. XD**




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(((That doesn't really make sense though. :'( ))))
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**Brian is walking over, Johnathon says hi...**




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*oh i thought his name was Ryan..my bad*

Grey-

"Good," Brian answered, snaking his arm around her waist, "sorry to interupt, just wanted to say hi, it's been a while."
"Yeah, nice to see you." the boy seemed uncomfortable. I stretched my hand out to the girl,
"Hi, I'm Greyson. I love your dress, it's beautiful."
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Johnathon:

I frowned. why was he complimenting her? I was mad. It shocked me. I wasn't like that, normally. why now? I sighed. I had no right to be jealous. It wasn't like I was dating her. I looked at her. she was beautiful in that dress. I sighed. Why was I mad?



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