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My heart is yours

*singerofthenight* · 2008-03-20T12:26:39Z

My heart, silently beating Cries out to you. My love, strong and true Forever faithful, I’ll be to you. My world, on and on it spins. Round’ and round’ Like a mary-go-round that never ends. How long do you say, I'd reach out for you? Forever and eternity It will always be true. When I'm with you I soar through the air. Flying higher and higher, Till there's no more sky As day whipers on, Leaving no room to breathe. My love for you will grow, Like the never ending sea. And when the day fades and all goes to night, My love for you will shine with all of its might.

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Wed Mar 26, 2008 7:25 pm

blacktiger3915 says... · Wed Mar 26, 2008 7:25 pm

Does anybody have a tissue? The last two stanzas made me cry even more! :smt022

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Mon Mar 31, 2008 7:41 am

casey_kent says... · Mon Mar 31, 2008 7:41 am

I loved it. I love the way you used figurative language in it. Although I found some errors that need some fixing.

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