This is rough of my new idea novel prologue of' Dark Children'
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Dark Children
Prologue
Oh I’ll tell you a tale; oh I’ll tell you a tale. I’ll tell you a tale that will rock your world, change it, stain it. Oh this is tale that will smear you with scarlet red, drown you in sorrow and misery. I’ll tale you a tale that will leave you cowering under your blanket. Oh suffer you will. I’ll tell you a tale. One that you won’t forget. One that you can’t forget. Oh I’ll tell you a tale…
The scream cut the night air like a knife through butter. The world was stained, the light sank, the darkness rose
The rules have turned, today is our day. We rule the night.
The wind cracked the silent night, tearing at the tree leaves. The roads were quiet and empty, and the alleyways free of junkies. The streets were gang free, this was unusual. The only sign of life was the lonely man, who was rubbing his hands together-keeping them warm as the blistering wind struck them time and time again. Homeless and poor this single innocent man was nearing his end. His ragged and ripped clothes struggled against the merciless wind, and his bare feet freezing on top of the cobbled path. Then the silence came. The thundering wind came to a sharp halt; the moon withdrew into the clouds and even the stars - everything was just gone - dead to the night. The stranger's dark eyes froze and his hands clasped tight. All he could to was listen intently and try to figure out what is happening but his brain was gone, nerve system vanished. It was just him and his ears. And it wasn’t long before the only working part of his body picked up the rhythmic sound of them, the darkness. “Oh I’ll tell you a tale; oh I’ll tell you a tale. I’ll tell you a tale that will rock your world, change it, stain it. Oh this is tale that will smear you with scarlet red, drown you in sorrow and misery…And that was the last he ever heard, he was gone just like the rest. Hear that rythmic song and that was it. There was nothing you could do. And there was nobody to tell the tale. No witnesses, there never was. It was just them...
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