psychic soldiers

sylverdawn · 2008-03-19T01:51:18Z

*I think I came up with a good story book idea and couldn't wait to post it* plot : Unlike my last two storybooks, this one isn't based in a fantasy world. It is present day and the setting is Miami, Florida. An underground organization has been working on creating biological weapons, or super soldiers, for several decades now. The result of this research is a serum, that when drunk, gives the subject psychic powers and the ability to change into a single animal form . At least that's how it should be, however up until now all of the test subjects have died after drinking the serum. The organization had to change locations to a different city because the government was beginning to close in on them. They disguised the serum as a case of soda-pop, but during transport the case was stolen by a simple thief, who later sold it to a group of kids from the same high school. For some unknown reason though, several of the kids (us) survive taking the serum and end up as the super soldiers. However the organization that created the serum has international power, and the only scientist who knows the formula is captured by the government, and killed to silence him. As the only living subjects they are after us for several reasons. Our bodies contain the serum, so they can learn the formula, they need to learn why we managed to live through it. Also our newfound abilities mean we are worth several billion dollars. Now those kids have to salvage or create a new life, while at the same time they struggle to stay one step ahead of an underground organization with world wide power. How will you react to your abilities, will you be happy or fall into despair? And even if by some miracle you manage to gain control over your powers, how will you use them? Will you go for personal gain, join the organization, or try to protect normal humans? Either way you can no longer go back, only forward. --------------- rules : The typical stuff applies here. No god-moding no killing off characters without permission that stuff. and you are limited to two characters. --------------- characters : Please follow this character outline. Another thing, all of the PS (psychic soldiers) are also physically enhanced. So they are all stronger and faster then normal humans. name- age- gender- appearance- personality- background- powers- (at first you are limited to three psychic abilities. As the story progresses you can gain more abilities, but before adding them please pm me so I can okay the new ability.) second nature- (in short, your animal form. You can only ever have one so choose carefully) path- (basically what you intend to do with your abilities.) *alright I'll start the storybook once three or four people post characters. At that point I'll also create a DT*

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Fri Mar 28, 2008 1:41 am

Ghostwriter says... · Fri Mar 28, 2008 1:41 am

James popped out and saw a Van...just like the one from the other day.

He sneaked up behind it and looked at his hand.
" Please work..." He whispered and then he pressed his hand to the door and felt around to feel a leg. He was alseep.
James then felt around the leg and onto the hip...to find a pistol that felt like a stun gun. He then took it out and the man began to stir.
" What the..."

James pressed a button and a loud scream was heard, electric began to fly in it. James looked inside and saw that the man was drooling a bit and was convusling.
" Hey mate...Can I take a lift?"
James pulled the man out of the car and landed on the sidewalk.
" I guess so."

James didn't know how to drive, But he quickly catched on.
He felt around in his pocket to find his cellphone.
" That idiot car man didn't my phone."
Which has Sieyas phone number...

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Because it's fragile, yet it bring's the greatest emotions to you.

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Fri Mar 28, 2008 5:14 am

sylverdawn says... · Fri Mar 28, 2008 5:14 am

*alright, when do they get ambushed?*

Seiya-

Seiya leaped for the fridge and grabbed the meat. She made a quick ham sandwich and had a glass of milk before going to check out the house. Her eyes widened when she passed by Tobi's room on the second floor. The door was hanging off it's hinges and the room itself was completely trashed.

When her phone went off she must have jumped a foot in air. Seiya checked caller ID, seeing it was James she picked up. "James, it's Seiya. Hold on I'll meet up with the others so we can talk at the same time."

*Aghh... writers block*

DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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Fri Mar 28, 2008 11:57 am

Ghostwriter says... · Fri Mar 28, 2008 11:57 am

James looked at the phone and putted it in his pants. They abandoned him, then didn't rescue him...now they won't even have a decent phone call with him?
HE then heard police sirens. He looked in the mirror to see a police car climbing onto him.
" ah, shit."

James climbed out of the car and putted up his hands while the two officer's were shouting to put them up while aiming a gun at him.
" I'm up!" James yelled. At least he won't have to worry about being safe.
Suddenly one of the officer's pulled out a strange device that looked like a PDA. The officer pressed a button and James fell to the ground howling in pain.
" We have the target in custody. preceeding with termination."
" SHIT!" James screamed in pain.
And then the gun fired and James closed his eyes...and still had his eyes closed....and then he opened them and gasped.
Everything. The bullet, the gun, the police officers, everything was moving in slowtime!
James got up and walked up to the barely moving bullet.
" Sweet!" James laughed.
He walked up to the PDA officer and pulled out their gun.
" My pistol!" James growled and hitted the officer over the head on the head repeatly and then he felt the effects and fell to the ground without a word.
James did the same with the other police officer and then took the PDA and the Cruiser.

Just now...

The boy didn't know.
The girl looked from the trees with a smile to her face.
She then saw the boy grabb the speedcar and went flying off somewhere.
The girl walked down to the street and grabbed one of the moaning officers and shot a round into each of them.
She then released time and the police officers were quiet for the final time.

A person's heart is like a painting.
Because it's fragile, yet it bring's the greatest emotions to you.

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Tue Apr 08, 2008 9:05 am

Pundit says... · Tue Apr 08, 2008 9:05 am

Srry didn't get around to drinking it

Name: Robert

Age: 14

powers:Chronokinesis-space/time manipulation
Clairvoyance-seeing distant thigs(present/future)

True nature: Utahraptor

will finish later

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