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Hiya! I did thiese partly for my novel, and was inspired by the 'Save the Wolves' usergroup that I joined. The first is the original that I drew, and the others are computer changed versions.

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the second oe is my favorite, although the nose on yours seems a bit strange.... I'm not sure what about it, but ....aghh i don't know


anyways, if you fix the nose, it would be great!

I love the eyes :D
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Thank you Izzyeyore!
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Yes, I think your noise is a bit too pointed for a wolf. =P

Also, I think you could add some more fur, since wolves are covered in it but typically when people draw them it's mostly only shown around the edges.


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^See the chest? They use lots of random lines to show fur. I have few skills myself, but I think you could manage if you happen to draw another. ^_^

Otherwise, very cool. I also like the second, for some reason. Maybe because it's a little darker? =P

Overall, good stuff. =P Animals are super hard to draw (for me, anyways. My sister kicks butt at drawing >_>)
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Thanks again! I was unsure aboutt he nose, it looks too much like a dog. I wil change that. Ii like the second also, but the third is my favroutei. :-)
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I like the splotchy-effect of the second one (as does everyone else, apparently ^_^).

But they all seem a little bit... surreal. One thing, (the major thing in my opinion) is the fur issue Sleeping Valor noticed... your wolves look like dolls. Another factor is that the nose is too long (as Izzyeyore said). Another thing is that the eyes seem a little too big and not shiny enough.

What you have here is a nice, clean start. Work on the fur and it will be really nice!

Hope this helps!
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For me the nose almost looks like a beak. I think should you put a little more shadow effect in to soften it.
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Thnaks everyone! I drew this in around half an hour, I have added some fur and will change the nose.
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the right side seems a bit unproportional but other than that, its a good drawing!




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It's supposed to be looking to the right, or its left.
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My favourite is #3; it looks sponged on. Very cool. ^^

I agree with Azila that this is a good, clean start. At this stage, it's easy to add things to give the drawing more substance, like fur.

Some points for your consideration...

- I think you should go over the eyes with black pen/outliner to make them look more shiny and realistic.
- The nose is a bit too long, I'm afraid. It looks too sharp and not very canine... wolf muzzles are long, but kind of blunt at the end, more rounded.

I really like the nose, though. Great job there -- it looks quite realistic.

Overall, I think these are good drawings. A bit bare at the moment, but it won't be too hard to add fur and shading, right? :wink:

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The nose makes it look like Snoopy. Lol, but otherwise they're pretty good. I liked the third one, actually, it looks like a cool new form of art.
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I like the 2nd one the best. I also think the neck looks a bit long and it doesn't really seem to show the body.

Just gave me that impression.
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