Bag of Green Grapes

Bag of Green Grapes

Ploo!
number.
forty two two

PLU
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It was written on a bag of green grapes and that's how I read it. I thought it sounded cool, so I hath made it into a poem! Some might call it plaigiarism, or even just stupid. But I think it's funny. Have some humor, it's a silly poem! Enjoy!

~Yoyo

hahahaha!!

that is an amazing poem

Um...

I don't get it...

-Jared

Loved it!
Pretty funny you are my friend!
-Phebe!

Lol, wow., That was pretty funny. Interesting inspiraation, a bag of grapes. I liked it..


**L_A

Hmm... you have a good idea here, but I feel that it's lacking proper imagery and metaphor. I mean, I didn't feel anything after reading this.

*gigglesnort*

Oh, Yoyo, how I love thee. *goldstars*

-Saint Razorblade
The Official YWS Pirate

Interesting... *smiles and backs away*

OH!

I get it now! Hahahahah!

-Jared

Hm, it's interesting how you found that.

Obviously you have a lot of time on your hands.

[Giggled]

Ginge.

A quite original poem. I loved the rhythm and the language.

*snork*

Great job here. Inspiration comes in the most unlikely places, no?

*applause*

~GryphonFledgling

^_^

I think "ploo" is my favorite part.

Funny how so many things around us are humorous without trying to be. The poem was quaint. I think if you really wanted to make this a good poem and not just a funny little diddy you should add a bit more of what you did after you read that.

And also, what in the Sam heck is Ploo?

hahaha:) "Plu!"
I might just have to adopt your way of finding poems, yo:) bags of food... interesting

*giggle*

pretty sweet, yoyo *goldstar*

This made me giggle a lot. It's fun to say "Ploo!" xD

At first I didn't get it. It taked a while fo rme to get things like this, or eveyrhting. Anyway back to your poem:

Very funny. I liked to say it over and over. Like L_A said, weird inspiratiopn. YOu have quite an imagination.

Good luck with everything!

-- M.B.