True thoughts

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Last edited by Angel of Death on Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:32 am, edited 1 time in total.
True love, in all it’s celestial charm, and
star-crossed ways, only exist in a writer’s
mind, for humans have not yet learned
how to manifest it.




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Why are you copying the twilight series? It's not very original.
I won't readf your stories if you are just going to copy all the names of characters froma book many people have read.
Please change this,
Sincerely,
shanan-cat!
"Laugh like no one can hear you, dance like no one is watching, and love like you're going to doe tomorrow." --Unknown




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I can see that you have good writing skills :), but you can not copy off of Twilight. It's not original, and in the end, if you want to be a writer, it is not going to help you by copying another author’s work.
"Music in the soul can be heard by the universe" -Lao-Tzu




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You really shouldn't copy from Twilght.

You have the skills, but the originality isn't there,


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