The glow of the early morning sun streamed through the small openings of the bushy trees that lined the clouded skies. Small shadows of spiked leaves where cast over the mossy forest floor, and the signs of animal life could be detected through the small rustle of leaves, or the sharp call of a lonely bird.
A small hole opened into the greened earth, yips and pants erupted from the hole and the beginnings of a darkened damp nose slowly and cautiously inched its way into the light.
A sharp bark broke the short silence and a small black body darted up the hole and jumped into the sunlight. The pup pushed its fuzzy chest out and held its delicate head up in great pride for being the first one out of the den. It howled in joy and then leaped back towards the den. It poked its head in and let its fluffy black tail wag excitedly.
It yipped and snorted summoning its siblings to join him. Cautiously the other wolves stepped out of the den, shook the dirt from their pelts, and stretched; widening their pink jaws and stretching their small untouched tongues over their sharp white teeth.
The black pup had already discovered a young woman asleep in the mosses a little bit away from the den. He yipped and nipped at her muddied hair. She moaned stretching. Her face was bloodied, the wolf was already clearing that up, and with a few swift licks it was gone. This time in its place there lay a dark purple bruise just beneath her nose.
The wolf yipped pawing at her arm impatiently. Its eyes shone with curious excitement unlike the other wolves that cowered by the den anxiously, their thin tails tucked between their shivering legs.
The girl blinked her eyes once before opening them fully, only to look the puppy right in the face. She yipped in fear; quickly getting up and running into the trees.
The wolfs eyes followed her every movement curiously as she disappeared into the forest. It took a few steps forwards scenting the air cautiously at every step. The other two wolves growled and warned there brother to come back, he didn't care, he wanted to know who this was and what she was doing here.
Meanwhile in the forest the girl had found a tree and collapsed under it, she panted hard, as for she had been running as fast as she could away from those strange creatures.
Her fear began to weir off and she began to think things through, okay... What was that? It didn't look like the man. It had a longer nose and perky ears, its entire body was covered in hair and it had a long arm attached to its back end. Instead of walking on two legs it walked on all fours and it just didn't look right. [i] She sighed and let her head fall back against the trunk of the tree, her eyes studied her strange surroundings for a minute, [i]Where am I? Think, you where with the man now you are here.[i] She looked down the trees trunk and it all came to her, [i]I am out of the glass wall, I am where those people where, I am happy! She rose to her feet and dusted the moss out of her hair before sprinting back in the direction she had first come.
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Other than that I like your story idea. Just make sure not to make your sentences too long or over the top and you'll be good to go. 
