Trip to My Backyard

Continued from the "Trip to My Backyard" series


Probably the least interesting picture of the bunch, an aerial view of part of the water...


My sister playing in the mud


Late afternoon lighting...scrumptious


More pleasing lighting


My other sister posing


If you look hard, you can see her again in the distance

Well thats my series. Comments?

Hi!

I like these ones a lot better than the first ones.

1) I actually was interested by it, but the branch is out of focus in the foreground.

2) I would have liked that one better in color.

3) Again, something about the black and white makes it look a bit washed out. I think this one would be better in color as well. Something about how there isn't much contrast kinda bored me.

4) Not my favorite. Nice angle, but I've seen it before in other pics and if you are going to do black and white, there needs to be less motion in the picture, and better focus.

5) I really like this one, but she looks like shes in kindof an uncomfortable position

6) This one is the most washed out of all. The tree in the foreground is also blurry, and she is too far away to really see many details.

Overall: I think I'll echo my comments on the first series. I really want to see what these would look like in color.

See ya around!

~Lupis

Thanks for the comments (collectively from the first part of the series) everyone. I know a lot of you would rather see these in color, but these are indeed film, therefore theres not much I can do about the lack of color....anyways thanks again

I liked the first one, the others didn't really do much for me. I liked it, but the quality wasn't excellent. Improve that and I might be able to tell what they are a bit better!

If you click on them you get their fill size, that improves the pixel thing a bit.

I love the ones with your sisters in them, especially the first one. It adds something of a human element to it? Meh. I'm not sure exactly how to phrase it. But I like those the best. ^^

I also like the first and last ones. They're pretty, and I imagine even better in full colour. The other ones... just don't do it for me. Too busy. Can't really find what your focus is. In full colour I'm sure it would be different, but in this washed-out old fashioned style, there's just too much going on if you ask me.

But I do like your photography. Keep it up, I'd like to see more. ^^
-Saint Razorblade
The Official YWS Pirate

I definitely like these better than the other ones, there is more of a contrast. But, they are still rather washed out...but I won't go over that again haha.

The last two with your sister are the best ones. The first of those is pretty good, but you should have had her take off her shoes to make it more effortless and natural...if that makes sense. I don't know, maybe I just hate shoes. The second is pretty good as well, but I think it would be better in color still to emphasize the fact that she is, in fact, there.

Good luck!