Your so right, you didn't say you were the best, but your attitude said it for you. You take critisism in a bad way, why not use it to your advantage? You need to stop flipping at people now before you make enemies, and make people want to critisize your work
You posted this on the website to get feedback and advice. If you are not willing to learn, then prhaps you should take your arrogance away. Don't be so stubborn and think you are perfect. Just read the criticism and repect other members please.
I also sent you a PM about spaces. It's so your work is easier to read. Otherwise it looks like one solid chunk.
Pippo, we are trying to help you. We as Lakegirls pointed out, are here to crit work, and help YOU become a better writer. Criticism is actually one of your better tools for writing. We as your readers, say 'what do you mean here', 'this needs to be clarified,' etc. because it doesn't make sense.
We are NOT expecting you to be perfect, as previously pointed out. What we need is more material to work with. We are NOT expecting you to give us the whole story. If you look at the forums, you will see 'ch. 2,' 'section 1.' We, or at least, I, am expecting maybe half a page to a full page. That really isn't very much.
And, Pippo. Do not EVER yell at people on the forums again. These are good, decent people, many of which are my friends. Have the decency to treat them as respectfully as they treat you. That was very irresponsible, rude, and totally uncalled for.
I'm sorry, yes, I am very annoyed at you. Unfortunately, that is too be expected. I would crit your work, but I am currently too angry to do so. Perhaps another time.
*Seraph*
"How grateful we are that the heavens are indeed open, that the gospel of Jesus Christ has been restored, and that the Church is founded on the rock of revelation. We are a blessed people, with apostles and prophets upon the earth today."~ Thomas S. Monson
omgudness,
ure all having the go at ME!
so i was new, yeah, i'm over it now, i made mistakes, i argued i-whatever.
yet, you guys, all seem to be still picking at me like a loose nail!
i've sorted it out, i've TRIED to make up.
yet you just let it pass you all by.
so, stop picking on me, i've sorted it out, YOU be good forum citizens and put a stop to it yourselves, because i darn right know i can't stop you.
"We all" is inaccurate. You sent apologies to the other people [I assume] but on these particular posts you have seemed unrelenting in criticizing them.
I didn't know you had apologized until someone PMed me. I'm sorry. That was my mistake. Please do not assume we all are going to have a go at criticizing you. There are plenty of examples of people who want to help.
"How grateful we are that the heavens are indeed open, that the gospel of Jesus Christ has been restored, and that the Church is founded on the rock of revelation. We are a blessed people, with apostles and prophets upon the earth today."~ Thomas S. Monson
