It's okay. It's not horrible for what it is but it's not spectacular for what it isn't, either. Yea...that made no sense. I'm kind of at a bit of a loss because I'm not sure what kind of character this story portraits: is it cartoon, realistic, somewhere in the middle? No one knows. I think we need more detail on this picture before a real critique can be given.
It's okay! I suggest that if you haven't already, change your password to something that your friends wouldn't know, Pronto!
Adam and Vampire: It is removed. Otherwise you would see that little symbol. (That I forgot the name of. )
Firearris
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!" [Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel! [Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel. [Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat" Take that, Lumi.
